Thanks for sending me here (I'm precious on ADF). You got their characters just right and the heartbreak feel of the impossible relationship. I'm ready for the movie.

NOO! I hate Simon! i was so happy when i read that clary and jace kissed but now *sniff* shes with that bloodsucker again. . .please continue with another clace chapter!

I almost fucking cried. I just...this was so beautiful and captured all of them so perfectly. Amazing. Keep up the wonderful, talented work.

Hey

This is Mentallady from ADF.

Loved this!

Thanks fro sharing.

:0)

Beautiful! Amazing!

This was very, very good. The characterizations were great! The following especially:

"Look at you, fondling me while I'm defenseless," Jace said suddenly... "Can't even keep your hands off a wounded man."

hahaha Too funny!

The intensity between Jace and Clary (in the books and in FF) is always overwhelming, but in a good way. )

Excellent work!

-Raggdoll

i loved this chapter

This was a very exciting oneshot!

Gurl.

I don't ever want to hear you say that you can't write well again.

You got the characterization SPOT ON.

And you know how I love me some Jace...

Write another! Pleaseeeeee:)

Write another! Pleaseeeeee:)

Amazing. You had characters down so well. I didnt want it to end. I loved it!

Great story! I really love the whole Clary and Jace scene. Even though I haven't even read the series.. Hmm.

Still feel like a perv for wanting them to get it on. Though...it seems like there's a bit of a spoiler in your author's note...isn't there?

1) Getting caught making out while STILL "brother and sister"

Meaning...well. That's pretty self explanatory I think.

*sigh*

Damn you and your spoilers.

Reeeeeeallllllllly good! Update soon? D

That was great! You did a really good job capturing the characters; they felt very much like they did in the series.

I loved the UST between Jace & Clary. It's so wrong but it's right ;) I loved that they were at least talking about it as well. That was not something they did a great deal of in the book series.

Fantastic. You should do more :)