|Reviews for Unspoken|
| Mainwarudo Kohna chapter 1 . 12/4/2016
My name is Mainwarudo Kohna and I have to say, this is constructive criticism, but I personally didn't like it. The story was random and didn't make sense. There was no real plot, but your heart was in the right place. Some advice, these types of stories need some kind of introductory paragraph and the entire thing can't be questions you have, and also have to have more than 3 characters or people won't get the meaning behind it. If you want to do something like this and don't want to write a long, chapters on chapters story, then try writing a poem about how one of the other girls feels when she looks at Mew and Ai. Just a suggestion. It was a good try, and keep writing. You can only get better from writing more. Good luck!
| anonymous chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
you've definately got the characters personalities down.
I've readthe psuchic academy manga and i'm disappointed there aren't more fics about it given how the series ended.