Reviews for Breathe
DramioneDaily chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
I misses you *( Really hope you update again - really hate Alice and Jasper needs to wake the heck up! He "doesn't think of you" is such a bitch thing to say but the way he acts kind of makes you think... and him dating someone so selfish and self-absorbed makes you wonder if he's even worth it. x_x
DramioneDaily chapter 3 . 2/21/2011
This isn't going to be a triad/threesome fic, is it?

I'm loving the JB - Alice is a selfish fool, I must agree. ope Jasper opens his eyes and gets his shit together. /
penty101 chapter 3 . 2/20/2011
i looove your story3 its like nothing ive ever seen before. youre a great writer to boot!
Taraiha chapter 3 . 2/18/2011
I'ma say it one more time. In the sequel, J&B better end up together or I will hunt you down.
NatalieLynn chapter 2 . 1/24/2011
I just found this and really like what you have so far. It's been a while since you updated last. Do you plan on continuing it? I hope so.
Taraiha chapter 2 . 11/23/2010
Jazz needs some TLC. I volunteer, pick me! Pick me!

Have we seen the last of Alice? I kind of hope she comes back actually because although Bella is irritated with her I kind of feel sorry for her.
Liamsgurl33 chapter 2 . 11/23/2010
sonyabrady1971 chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
oohhh...I love what you have so far...can't wait for more
Liamsgurl33 chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
Love it. Its really good.
StrawberryShortPants chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
It sounds an awful lot like you're going to characterize Alice and this abortion issue in the most unsympathetic light possible just as a way for Bella/Jasper to get together. Shame. Abortion really isn't an option explored and actually pursued in twilight fanfiction and if this had been done in a way without villainizing Alice I would have liked it a whole lot better.