Reviews for Brother
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
I. Um. I retread this.. Because I'm a pansy and I love you. And I am tearful and blubbering all in a heap.
-guestiful
Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
Oh. Oh my. ;-;
I read Avarice, tenfold, and I've finally decided to delve into your other stories. I decided to start in Albion and work my way up. I., tears.
Good job milady.
-guestiful.
Fanfiction-Has-Ruined-My-Life chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
I had to fight back tears when I read that Logan died! I've never EVER thought about killing him but reading it is just as bad! Great job! It was beautiful*cries into hands screaming, "Noooo not Logan!"*
pseud0zombie chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
Jesus... I started crying when I finished reading this. I never have the heart to kill Logan, and always hate myself for being a tyrant... And this is why. You did an amazing job of writing this.
Murdoc's Mismatched Eyes chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
*sniffle* *wipes away a small tear*

Oh God that ending was so sad!

Great job! Amazingly written!
Kay chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
I loved it! So beautifully written.
Effective Immediately chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
It's nice to see someone bother tackling this issue instead of once again having the hero just magic the money out of nowhere and save everyone with no real explanation as to how they could've done it. You can't just play a lute and buy a few stores to amass that kind of fortune. Otherwise Logan would've been all over that as a solution and still adored by the people like he was five years ago.

The reality is very different, and harsh. A leader isn't even so much a person as something that is there to be used. It's pretty much his life for the people; if they hate him, so be it.
Nevvarchive chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
D:
BANEHiwatari chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
I cried. I didn't kill Logan in my playthrough, but I still cried. It's too sad. TTTT
aswewalked chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Well, I cried. ;'( This was absolutely fantastic…great job.
juvenileFANTASY chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
Really beautiful. I love the ascent and descent of all of the princess's emotions. So lovely, and the way it ended, only to complete the cycle... truly poetic. Truly heart-breaking. Beautiful job.
Loving-Chakra chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
This was a very well put story with good depth. This is all true. Hate it but you cant solve everybodys probs/

Gah~ If you do then it's no fun playing fable when everybodies dead-_-
almostinsane chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
Great story! The poor prince and princess... Thanks for writing this. God bless!
ruk182 chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
I don't know if it makes me crazy, but this made me cry. A lot. It was so beautifully written, with such a beautiful message and it was all so beautiful! Truly an amazing piece.

I sort of became a Tyrant in the game... But I only did it because I've had a huge fondness for Reaver since the second game. The orphans have no place to live now!
HeWhoDestroysAll chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
I see you played fable III heh.

Thats the cold reality in that a leader has to be cold and cruel in order to lead, to rule.

After all a hero is nothing but a scrap goat for the people.