|Reviews for Halfway Full|
| Avatar chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
Hahahaha! I too.. almost choked! I was drinking milk while reading this..hahaha! XD
This is HILARIOUS!
| Soundwave 0107 chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Hmmmm, what an interesting lil' funfic we have here. I must say, it brings up a good emotion. Allow me to describe it:
ROFLMAO! Hilarious! XD
I loved how Ty Lee kept making her lil' comments all the time, interuppting speech-Azula, and then deducing Toph's ultimate power. She can see ur naked.
Azula was typically as she is, all planning and serious-face, maybe some shock and soft here, but pretty Azula. Mai is Mai XD
Grammar is nice, theme is pretty damn funny, characterisation is alright, except for the OOC bit you stated, so good job :)
With regards, Soundwave 0107
| akami chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
hoho, time to leave a review even though i usually tend not to
i had read this story a bit ago, and couldn't help but remember it because it answered that question of where Ty Lee and Mai had been during the eclipse, which was something i had always wondered about! and i loved this little insight and their discussion
There could have been some OOC, but i think a lot of that depends on how others view the characters. like, in my stories i have these three being friends but other people write them as pretend-friends-that-hated-each-other, etc. I think as long as the writer doesn't take it to the extreme the characters could remain in character even if they might say stuff that they never did in the series.. or something. well, I don't know really, but I thought everything was believable
i also liked how you wrote the dialogue, and those moments of bonding between these threeee!
and mai choking on her tea was the bestt
and of course ty lee would be the first to point out toph's secret talent