|Reviews for Fictionista Witfit Challenge 4|
| kselzer chapter 111 . 12/5/2012
7! 7 children! Oh he'll no, I'd kill him.
| kselzer chapter 97 . 12/4/2012
Poor thing. So they decided to stick with two and not try the turkey baster again? And...eww.
| kselzer chapter 14 . 12/3/2012
I figured that came along with mating, the falling quickly thing. It does help ensure their safety after all, at least a little bit.
| Twilightobsessed09 chapter 111 . 8/10/2011
Yep, that happens...
Yay! for these two and a great ending for them.
| Melolabel chapter 111 . 8/9/2011
BAHHHH loved it. The giant brood, the threats of divorce or vasectomy, all of it was perfect. I loved Loudward and Crankyella. And I liked how you tied up the earlier implied infertility struggles with Hyperfertility. That was perfect. Great job!
| latuacantante4him chapter 111 . 8/9/2011
Great ending. Poor Bella. I was so happy when Edward started barking orders. :) I also have a friend who got pregnant after having her tubes tied. Yeah, Parkward!
| karalynn79 chapter 111 . 8/9/2011
I have been reading all your story lines for the past few weeks and just got caught up. I am loving it all. I can't wait to see how Parkward ends.
| mamacat20 chapter 111 . 8/9/2011
I couldn't stop laughing as I read over this ch. They ended up with 7 kids and Edward's super sperm got her pregnant even with her tubes tied. Goodness, these 2 sure know how to get around all the barriers of having kids.
Parkward, come to momma!
| jennayg123 chapter 111 . 8/9/2011
Oh Edward and his mini football team of children! At least they're happy! Great ending for these two! And I'm so excited for Parkward!
| crystalight22 chapter 110 . 8/8/2011
that sounds like a great wedding no budget busting here
| jennayg123 chapter 110 . 8/8/2011
While it would have been nice to see more of their wedding night I agree that this was the perfect ending for them- the rest of their story has been so innocent that it might have been odd to read more their night- not that I would mind at all if you decide to include it at some point! What are our choices for continuations? I'd say do a mix without knowing which ones you are considering but you know we will all love anything you choose!
| Melolabel chapter 110 . 8/8/2011
So sweet. Sigh. You can flounce the rest, but only because I haven't started any of the others. If I had, I'd be nagging you to finish those too. :)
So the fake name really wouldn't have mattered much since Emmett dropped them off, huh?
| mamacat20 chapter 110 . 8/8/2011
Of course these 2 would have something come in the way of their wedding. A flat tire couldn't keep these 2 apart though. :)
As for finishing up the witfits. I love to see what is cooking in your head but I so want these to be finished. :( Please! *pouts*
Don't really mind not seeing the honeymoon lemon there. Just happt to get an epi with a look at where these 2 are in the future.
| Twilightobsessed09 chapter 110 . 8/8/2011
*whimpering & pouting* no sex scene...pbbt!
Okay, the plot bunnies are very tempting, yet I would really love it if you were to finish another witfit of your choice. I can hardly decide anything you write is worth the read.
| latuacantante4him chapter 110 . 8/8/2011
Love it. I love how Carlisle has to pull them apart. LOL! I love to read anything you write. Of course I want you to finish your other stuff but you gotta write what you are inspired to write. :)