|Reviews for Adios|
| creepyorcool chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
aw, poor usnavi.
this is so depressing,
but realistic. i liked it
| Orthographer chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
*sniff* It's terribly sad, but it feels very realistic. To be a bit nitpicky, some of the phrasing is a bit awkward, but mostly, this was a wonderful story. It's making me regret that I didn't manage to convince someone to take me to In the Heights when it was in Chicago.
| Critique chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
Why are you putting down the show and the Characters? If you want to write something depressing and crappy then make up your own characters and stop stealing from others. Your writing isn't the worst, but who would want to ready this story? I wanted my 5 minutes back.
| fires have fly-ed chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
Raeann, I love you! I'm gonna cry. I feel like a piece of my life is gonna vanish. So long as the Forum's up, though, it's okay.