Reviews for Negirau Atashinchi |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() yay oh whats going to happen when he sees Isshin...please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, that was interesting. A lot of people suddenly appeared in this chapter. There was a moment when I was a bit confused, but you seemed to have provided a couple of impromptu recaps in much needed places. You do that a lot, and it is really helpful. It was especially helpful to me this time, since it had been a while since I read the previous chapter. I usually root for Hitsugaya, but, for once, I hope that they are able to tow him back in for help. After he stumbles across Karin, of course. She would make an interesting addition to the "party." _ Whatever happens I look forward to seeing what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() but if he replaces it soon enough, nobody has to know. |
![]() ![]() ![]() He always feels that he's messed up. i want to say update faster but i realize you were working on other stories. p.s. i found mysele reading diamond treasure and that story has a lot of potential. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Knowing Toshiro, he probably either went to that one hill he likes or wherever Ichigo or Karin are. Renji always has to make things worse for Toshiro, doesn't he? |
![]() ![]() Great story! Just a tip: you use the words firmly and stated a lot. Maybe another adjective would work. Hitsukarin is one of my favorite pairings, and you REALLY write it well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The plot is really picking up now, and I liked where you're going with it. I have a lot of questions that I look forward to getting answered: like what is in store for both Hitsugaya and Karin, and what in the world is Hinamori going to contribute. I especially like how you are incorporaring bits of the new stuff...which reminds me that I have gotten behind. Sorry it has been so long since you've heard from me. Hopefully I'm back...again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still waiting for an update. will the shiba's appear in karakura? if so wonder how ichigo will react to uncle ganju? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still waiting for an update. will the shiba's appear in karakura? if so wonder how ichigo will react to uncle ganju? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Story but i don't understand chapter 19 to chapter 21 so do you think you can explain it to me Spectacular story and pls. publish more |
![]() ![]() ![]() i can't believe i haven't seen this story till now... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder who will be coming to the World of the Living. Hoping Jushiro will be one. You know how protective he is of Toshiro. Not often you see fics that have Isane as one of the main characters. This storyline just keeps getting more and more interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dose anyone else want to give Hinimori a good punch? xx : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice job~ I really like how in some of your stories you have the whole shiba family thing. It really makes everything a lot more interisting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Isshin is a catalyst for trouble, I swear. I do love it though. |