Reviews for What is… going on?
iSniffMarkers chapter 5 . 4/3/2011
Love this story :) Can u plz update soon? It takes 2 long :(
Tessadragon chapter 5 . 4/3/2011
Oh wow! I can't wait to find out what happens next :-D update soon!
FangOfDrknss chapter 3 . 3/19/2011
Please don't give up on this story! It's so interesting! *Cries*
FangOfDrknss chapter 4 . 3/18/2011
It's weird that Van Kleiss still has his regular up the good work.
FangOfDrknss chapter 2 . 3/18/2011
Awesome keep it up! I love this weird life of worlds are way too confusing.
Data Seeker chapter 4 . 3/9/2011
Hi

Nice little update. The quality is very good.

The following scenes are amusing and well-written; Branna seems to have serious mood swings. Wonder what her problem is.

The scene with the mob-boss-like figure and his minions was amusing. Dark, but amusing.

If your trying to make us fee like we’re in the story, your doing great. Every instinct is screaming that what Rex is going through is reality, and not a clever prison.

This is what I think of the wholesome standards. A part from a slang in the author’s note, I have no qualms with the chapter.

I hope this review brightens your day. God bless.

Data Seeker
iSniffMarkers chapter 4 . 3/2/2011
horrible nightmare :O :P

Plz update soon!
PenanceGirl chapter 4 . 3/1/2011
AWW! I hope Rex and Brianna get together! (I nver liked circe!) Anyways.. this is really good:)
Second daughter of Eve chapter 4 . 3/1/2011
Oo, this is gonna get interesting...
Jessk13 chapter 4 . 2/28/2011
Nice job will you bring the original plot back into your story? It might add a intresting twist :)
Daemon Prime chapter 4 . 2/28/2011
Nice chapter. My idea of how Van Kleiss was behind this was just now blown out of the water. I wonder if this world is true, but if it's not would Rex choose to stay or go back?
iSniffMarkers chapter 3 . 2/15/2011
Great story :D Plz update soon!

Oh, what if u bring Kenwyn in? (from episode 'Basic')
xxXDanniXxx chapter 3 . 2/8/2011
wow really cool! i like it! can't wait to see how it all ends! YOU HAVE TO GET BACK TO REALITY REX !
Data Seeker chapter 3 . 1/4/2011
Dear Author

Great update. The quality is great in many areas, particularly the psychological suspense your putting Rex (and the readers) through. There is at least one typo, but no big deal.

The beginning with Rex surrounded those people that sneak attacked him (in the second chapter) were great, well written, full of suspense, humor, drama and great dialog; and it was great when it turns out their his friends and they were just pulling a prank on him (arguably cruel, considering Rex’s condition, but on one is perfect)

The following scenes with Rex going through life, contemplating his supposed Dream Life and supposed Real were great, full of depth, complexity and lots of suspense.

The ending scenes with a girl surrounded by thugs and Rex intervenes, driving the low lifes away, and seems to impress the girl were great, full of drama, depth, emotion, detail and suspense! Also that mysterious clue (namely that Rex realized that he could fight very well, considering that his skills were in his dreams, so how could he do it in real life) was great too.

The wholesome standards are high. Also, I have no qualms with that reference to zombie video.

I hope this review brightens your day. God bless.

Data Seeker
98 | « Prev Page 1 .. 2 3 4 5 6 .. Last Next »