|Reviews for One Day|
| RICEwong chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
so cute man
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
| HiiroKumo chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
If only this REALLY happened in canon. I'd be over the moon. To the best couple ever in Naruto, Jiraiya and Tsunade!
| risajoyce chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
hello, i am philippine,,thougg your story was written years ago..still i want to comment..it is so cute..yeah it is sad but in ended in a lighter mood..that is why i really like it..
| EsteVamp4998 chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
Beautiful! I fell in love in this one shot quickly!
| Joliet E. Bunyao chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
This is so touching, and it really seems like this can actually happen in the manga. I love it, TsuxJir is one of my OTPs, and it was just simply amazing. 3
| Snowkid chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
that are jiraiya and tsunade for you! love this story!
| Ashurei Aque Blu chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
I will not cry...
P.s good work.
| Engxty Piksy chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
wow such a touching story! i always wanted jiraiytsunade to work out but sadly...
awesome fic! :D
| alphaladywolf chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
This was so bittersweet. I don't know whether to cry or laugh. JIRAIYA DIES! I knew that, but why? He was such a great character. You really understood both their characters. Tsunade/Jiraiya were great friends like Sakura/Naruto. I was always curious on what would happen if the underdog got the girl.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
So cute. In a way, this makes it a bit better.
Thank you so much for writing this.
| SiriusBalisticPretzels chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
dguhdcvnmbfbvreirut...I can't speak properly I'm overcome by the bittersweetness that is this story. I absolutely one hundred percent love it!
| Solaris-Whitefish chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
AAW THIS IS SOO CUTE ABSOLUETLY FAN DABI DOSSE!
| JSeru chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
It's not simple for me to feel that warm-and-fuzzy-feeling from a fanfiction...but by god, man, you did that and MORE! 6/5!
| Ozuchi-Kozuchi chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
Lovely story. Sweet and funny all in a neat little package. )