|Reviews for Fatal Attraction|
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/2
This is an amazing story. I have been reading for a long time and sometimes it is hard to find good material. But this story is golden... so far.
| Guest chapter 35 . 10/13/2013
There is a reason why i stop watching vampire series,the plot lines jst get so tangled and next thing theres use of one plot line:in your case she cant love him nonsense. Your story had potential but you jst ruined it. Sorry i dont like your female lead so im off reading it
| Xenobia Ryane Whitlock chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
This was an amazing story. I loved the plot, and you kept me in suspense with wanting to know how everything was developing betweent the characters. You kept us entranced and your writing style was very smooth and flowed very well. You're an amazing writer and i hope to be reading more of your work in the future. So, keep writing and being amazing. If you havent you should post this to fiction press and wattpad so that more people can read this.! Happy Writing
Lotz of Luv,
Xenobia Ryane Whitlock
| lover in the shadow chapter 44 . 1/20/2013
I finished your story within two days...Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! I loved it OMG I'm like laughing and crying at the same time right now! You are an amazing writer! You made it easy to get in touch with the characters.. but I have to admit it got a little confusing at the end but I still loved every bit of it...please write lots more stories! Oh and Congrats your the first author I'm following!
| Blue fantaisie chapter 11 . 11/9/2012
Best chapter so far, and what a cliffie!
| thelittlekitten chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
So I don't know if anyone has brought this up, but I just finished your story and its the little things that bug me. It's barely, not barley... Barley is grain and barely is almost. Just had to put that out there. Call me the grammar nazi
| EldoradoGirl14 chapter 8 . 9/30/2012
you did just fine I like it because you never really get to see Kalins pov so I liked it. Tell your fiance that he did a good job to. :)
| rubiediamond chapter 8 . 9/22/2012
I didnt knw u like BoA. I love her too and Eat You Up is my favorite song by her! Love the story,too!
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/18/2012
Dam why did it have to end? Very good story keep it up!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
Seriously feels like I'm reading a published book :)
| alistarsmusic chapter 44 . 9/10/2012
Ahhh! It's over?! Why?! Gosh I want it to continue from here but I guess it's okay. Since there will be a sequel. But it's all going to be in Fortis's POV? That will be different...Anyways I loved this story! And I can't wait for the next one! Thanks for sharing this amazing story with us readers :D
| Sophia123 chapter 43 . 7/22/2012
You cannot stop there! Hurry and update please :)
| alistarsmusic chapter 43 . 7/10/2012
I wonder if Becca will ever forgive and be more civil with Philip? He is her father too...And the ending of this chapter...just so suspenseful. I wonder what her mother is doing there? And I love the relationship between Kalin's sister and Becca. It means the in-laws don't have a problem with each other and get along. But Elizabeth is Fortis's daughter...very surprising. I can't wait to read more! Doing an amazing job!
| alistarsmusic chapter 42 . 7/10/2012
I just love the way Kalin treats Becca. The way a woman should be treated. And he cares about the way she feels. And I'm so glad that Elizabeth is back in the picture. She is such a sweet girl. But I feel bad that Becca has to deal with all of Kalin's clan staring at her as if she's not part of them.
| alistarsmusic chapter 41 . 7/10/2012
I can't believe Philip was there when Becca woke up. No wonder Kalin was so mad. It's only reasonable that he would be. But what I never expected to read was that he's Becca's father and she never knew. No wonder he was so close to her. I just thought he was a close friend watching over her and her 'disease'. And the intimacy between Kalin and Becca was...intense but I'm glad they both got what they needed for a while.