Reviews for Taboo
Dancingwithawriter chapter 1 . 11/27/2015
GAH! I Loved every moment... until i got to the bottom and saw that this was a one-shot... I wish there was more. I love your work. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2014
You rly should continue the story! It was so good!
motherduckatschool chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
You wanna write a part two? This is excellent writing!
PhandomGirl chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
The ending didn't really feel like closure a you should put another chapter up at least
Sarah v chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
Soooo hot
scribblesforlove346 chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
I wish you would continue this!
AlterEgoEdna chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
Yes, the taboo is often the most delicious. I really liked this story. Not my favorite of yours, because I LOVE You Are My Muse, but this one is still great. Jasper had a Cinderella story, and Alice was his Princess Charming. So cute. I also actually (brace yourself) like how you didn't turn this into a filthy buttfucking thing...the restraint was indeed sexy. Sometimes those little touches are enough to capture our hearts and send us over the Big O edge.

Btw, that's the only time you'll ever hear me say that ;-)

loved it!

LockDown chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
Part 2! Where is part 2! This is completely deserving of a second part. It has such a great build up and I suppose there is a finish but it's really a teaser.

You don't have to evolve this one shot into a full blown story but a second part really should be there for real closure.
Tasnima chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
I loved this! Please write more!
baerritosandtears chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
I totally loved this!
jinx-hale chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
That's an awsome and alice are my favourite couple and I think they deserve more attention
Ash DeMoore chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
I must say I enjoyed ure story very much. I think you should continue :)
Naruto.Fruba.Lover chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Absolutely amazing. You really should make this a two-part story: the second one continuing where you left off. It would be really awesome to have the actual smut scene. What do you think? (:
Strawberries a la Folie chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
I totally helped you write this and would like to be credited. Haha just kidding bitch. I loved "Lovebites," which I consider to be fluffy. So since this is basically as smut porn cliche as you can get, I ADORE this! Alice can't sleep without an orgasm first, lol. I totally understand the feeling, though! And Jasper is a dirty little prick after all. Damn it I want adopted siblings. Good job on the word-Porno, it was fucktastic!
Fifille chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
This young reader definitely LOVED it )
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