|Reviews for After the Storm|
| firecracker93 chapter 4 . 6/6/2011
thanks for writing! please continue the story! i cant wait to find out who killed Lianne!
| where she went chapter 4 . 1/1/2011
I am really enjoying the plot thus far. Eager to read more.
My only criticism would be to maybe use some line/punctuation to break up the different scenes. It's not always clear with transitions that a new scene has begun.
| lateVMlover chapter 4 . 12/7/2010
I like your story. This last chapter was a bit disjointed. She's at the beach, then suddenly at the apartment. I'm hoping you'll write more!
| LoVeDelena13 chapter 3 . 11/17/2010
Having what her mom has done to her, I don't feel Veronica was too harsh on her mom. Her mom deserted them twice, stole fifty grand from them, and wasted her college money.
I am a huge Logan and Veronica fan, but I do feel sorry for Piz. However I do want Logan and Veronica to get back together in your story.
Your story's great. I love it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
| fgdfgd chapter 3 . 11/10/2010
I loathe Piz, so no, I don't feel sorry for him (sorry if that's what you're going for. I'm probably just cold hearted though. ;) )
It's pretty good so far. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
| StarzOfDraco chapter 3 . 11/10/2010
I felt a little sorry for Piz mainly because I generally feel for the guy. Though I'm a LoVe fan all the way, I still like the fella. Also, I don't think Veronica was too harsh. I thought her reactions were suiting.
| Natskl chapter 3 . 11/10/2010
Definately did not feel sorry for Piz! Really intrigued by the Lianne/Keith story. Can't wait for next chapter!
| BlondechixEJ chapter 3 . 11/10/2010
this is getting good. I did feel abit sorry for Piz but we all know its Logan she belongs with. cant wait to see how their relationships turns out.
keep up the good work.
| Em chapter 3 . 11/10/2010
I didn't feel sorry for Piz at all. The truth hurts sometimes haha, but hey, great story. Would like to know where you're going with this! :)
| LoVefan4ever chapter 2 . 11/8/2010
Loved the scene with Logan and Veronica, although, Logan should have been more stubborn and not left without her ; ) *sigh* I guess it wouldn't be them if she let him help for once ; )
I'm intrigued about the Lianne storyline. Can't wait for more!
| StarzOfDraco chapter 2 . 11/5/2010
I love it! I'm really enjoying the plot you're developing.
| forensicpathologistninja chapter 2 . 11/5/2010
how about you update this real quick-like so i can find out what happens? i swear this story is like crack.
| LoVefan4ever chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
I really like where you are going with this. I love how so detached you've written Veronica, and how both she and Logan have to really pretend like they don't care about each other.
I look forward to reading the next chapter!
| Natskl chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
A really good start! Looking forward to your next chapter!
| Islandergyrl chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
You are off to a great start. I'm very intrigued with what happens next. Please keep up the good work. Im hoping for a LOVEly ending ;)
I don't know why Veronica pretends to go for the safe guys when she is totally a bad boy girl at heart. And why is she so tired?