Reviews for Arrhythmia
Jess the Enthusiast chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
i really love this!
Juliet Forest chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
This is really good book!
You should make it more dirtier exiting etc
Prongs chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Sweet :)
thearcherballet chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Oh my God this is amazing... I got so many James S. Potter feels... 3
EmeraldSunLight chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
LOVE IT! I'm normally not a big fan of OC characters but Jenny was great!
Asery Aseerrmio Ecvoll Asernil chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
Some parts were funny and sweet overall wonderful oneshot
three broomsticks chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
I really, really loved this fic, it was brilliant.

"They break apart and her fingers fly to her lips, and there in his arms she's all fragility and long legs and shiny hair and sharp angles." That line was perfection. Utter perfection.

Well done, dude. Awesome, awesome, awesome.
mrscharlesbingley chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Super cute! :)
greencyanide chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
One word. Beautiful.

Okay, I'll add just a few more words.

I loved the line '...the stars in her eyes are suddenly burning again, all firefirefire.' It was not a very serious fic, which is why I loved it.
opaque-girl chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Another James&Jenny - yay, yay, yay :D Though personally i liked the one before this better :)
Mad-Hatter-103 chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
D'awwww :)
Hazelmist chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
Awww I love how great your OCs are and your James is lovable too. Jenny and James aren't Mary Sues, and they're flawed and the ending was so sweet!
Random Sox chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
Niceness x
ImNotSoEpic chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
I love the ending.

Whilst I love the ending, during the story there's a lot of language.

Also, I really like the JamesJenny, even if I don't know who Jenny is :D

"So now it's natural for me to be a sneaky Slytherin?"

Favourite line.

Sometimes I feel like a Slytherin, too. :D
Julia Claire chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Nice story. I did like the arguments between James and Jenny, but I thought the middle part with Sebastian was kind of hilarious... I loved it when Sebastian pointed out that his and Dom breaking up really wasn't any of his business either. I wasn't crazy about the end, for some reason, but I really did like the piece!
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