Reviews for Arrhythmia
broken barriers-gr8rockstarrox chapter 1 . 12/25/2015
I swear I usually despise OCs.
Usually being the keyword.
This fic was so adorable and sweet. And real too. The thing is, in real life, after fights like those, the broken friendship rarely gets fixed.
Great job writing.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/16/2015
Amazing. Simply amazing :)
Jess the Enthusiast chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
i really love this!
Juliet Forest chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
This is really good book!
You should make it more dirtier exiting etc
Prongs chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Sweet :)
thearcherballet chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Oh my God this is amazing... I got so many James S. Potter feels... 3
spaghetti9 chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
LOVE IT! I'm normally not a big fan of OC characters but Jenny was great!
Sayer Rose chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
Some parts were funny and sweet overall wonderful oneshot
three broomsticks chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
I really, really loved this fic, it was brilliant.

"They break apart and her fingers fly to her lips, and there in his arms she's all fragility and long legs and shiny hair and sharp angles." That line was perfection. Utter perfection.

Well done, dude. Awesome, awesome, awesome.
mrscharlesbingley chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Super cute! :)
greencyanide chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
One word. Beautiful.

Okay, I'll add just a few more words.

I loved the line '...the stars in her eyes are suddenly burning again, all firefirefire.' It was not a very serious fic, which is why I loved it.
opaque-girl chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Another James&Jenny - yay, yay, yay :D Though personally i liked the one before this better :)
Mad-Hatter-103 chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
D'awwww :)
Hazelmist chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
Awww I love how great your OCs are and your James is lovable too. Jenny and James aren't Mary Sues, and they're flawed and the ending was so sweet!
Random Sox chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
Niceness x
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