Reviews for Through dust and ashes
Wanderer3 chapter 14 . 5/13
I saw what ya did there... that quote from Babylon 5's Ambassador Kosh. Nice. _
Kingdark chapter 27 . 12/11/2016
I honestly wanted to give this story a chance. I actually made it to this chapter but your constant mis-use of their/there/they're are/is / is getting so annoying that I just can't convince myself to keep reading. How NOBODY can have pointed this out to you is something I don't understand. It's entirely possible that you will correct these mistakes in later chapters, after all, there are another forty two chapters left to read so it's highly possible that this will be corrected... If so, then let me know and I will give it another chance. It's not possible for me to start reading say ten or even twenty chapters ahead since that would mean I have missed whatever happened in those chapters.

Anyway, PLEASE just take a good look at when you use words like their/there/they're/was/is/are/your/you're/ and similar words like these ones.
JensenDaniels32 chapter 7 . 3/28/2016
Actually, I think it's more than possible with the current group. Also, why didn't Tobi/Obito survive? Hell, either Hidan or Tobi/Obito by themselves could probably take on the Reapers, what with the immortality and the perks of being able to become intangible with the Kamui.
JensenDaniels32 chapter 6 . 3/28/2016
Awesome! Will we (hopefully) be seeing more of Hidan and Jack soon? Best pairing ever, by the way.
JensenDaniels32 chapter 2 . 3/27/2016
Uh...Hidan's immortal.
Last Shadowism chapter 69 . 10/31/2015
70Th UPDATE?!
Seraphtor chapter 11 . 8/21/2015
You do know bullets in ME are the grain of sand right?
Yobikir chapter 7 . 6/4/2015
maybe they don't have the same problems with incest as us? i know one other fic where the clans themselves are only possible since incest doesn't have the negative side-effects it has for us humans.
Alfonse08 chapter 1 . 6/1/2015
Okay, more than a little pissed at how you killed off most of the Naruto characters on their home-world like how you killed off all of humanity in your other crossover section, however I am willing to be patient and keep reading to see if this story is any good before I make my final judgement.
Guest chapter 68 . 5/30/2015
I love this story!
Hakazu chapter 68 . 5/31/2015
Good chapter! I really liked how Nagato owned everything in his path
l3loodKnight chapter 67 . 4/3/2015
Enjoying your story so far a little disappointed that you didn't do the 'super weapon' to save the galaxy like the game did it would have been interesting so see how people reacted with the fact both previous races had come up with failsafes to beat the reapers the next go around.

im also curious on how you will do the geth vs quaren event since you didnt do legions event theres isnt much build up to really help legion and his people. Though id like to suggest garaa be the one to go into the pod that purges the virus and shows the geth history Since they mainly see the geth as simply killer machines it would bear more weight if someone like garaa were to suddenly side with legion and help center him a bit.
Naruto the joker chapter 43 . 3/16/2015
Dude I don't know if anyone told you this but your fic has an uncanny resemblance to Naruto: Lunar Eclipse by Thayerblue1. But good fic so far.
Guest chapter 67 . 3/10/2015
Interestingly enough, all Shinobi are descended from Aliens. According to canon, Kaguya O. Was an alien. Weird but cool.
Guest chapter 67 . 3/10/2015
Awesome
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