|Reviews for LILY POTTER: Life Unlived|
| the.stories.live.on chapter 2 . 5/27/2011
I am very excited for this. I can't really put it into words. Just update when you can. I'l be eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
| Bobmin356 chapter 2 . 5/21/2011
The spelling errors in this make it very hard to read. Please get yourself a beta. If you have a beta, fire them and get a real one.
| ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 3 . 4/19/2011
Good start to your story and thanks for sharing!
| IonicAmalgam chapter 3 . 4/19/2011
I think you write well enough to be without a Beta. :)
| vampiregirl99 chapter 3 . 4/17/2011
this is awesome
| wildparadise chapter 3 . 4/17/2011
Brilliant story. :) I LOVE it so far!
Is Lilly's 2nd child going to be a girl? If so is she going to fall in love with Severus? I HOPE SO! OR is Lilly going to fall in love with Severus (im a HUGE Severus Snape fan)
| rb2312 chapter 2 . 12/27/2010
So lily servives harry is still marked mouldyshorts is bodyless and hopefully sirius will stay out of prison
how will this play out on jkr's univers?
| show.me.the.stars chapter 2 . 12/26/2010
Oh wow, look at this!
I'm loving this, I really do. My fangirlyness is going haywire however at Sirius and Lily apparating away together... -cough- Goodness, James is dead not even five minutes and I'm imagining Sirius and Lily together! (They would make a beautiful couple however...if Sirius doesn't try to kill Peter that is.)
Anyway, oh man, poor Lily! And poor Harry! James...ahh, that's so sad!
I can't wait to see where you go with this, so until then!
| PhoenixOfIce chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
LOVE it! :D
| jesse1588 chapter 2 . 12/26/2010
I like your story so far. If you want a beta I can do it for you.
| dragonelfe chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
plz write more as this story is getting off to a really good start
| EccaDaisy chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
You sent me a msg about Beta-Reading, I cant reply as you have disabled Private Messages. But if you would still like to me Beta for you I am more then happy to, just email me randomchildoffate AT hotmail dot com.