|Reviews for She Flies with her Own Wings|
| mcanary chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
Such a sweet story, i really enjoyed it. Loved the cupid idea. So, tell me, was Bella, Roman's mark? Would love to see a continuation of this, please don't leave it as a one-shot. Just one more chapter to tie up the loose ends :) Thanks for sharing.
| NY13 chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
One more chapter please Johnnyboy...I need closure!
| redsock chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
You have every right to be proud. It's an enticing plot, is well written and well paced.
A decision would be really interesting, but it also works as it stands too.
I enjoyed it a lot - thanks!
| mrowemoon chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
I see why this one the contest. Very interesting concept of a cupid, something different, nice citrus, and can see the potential of a continuation. maybe a chapter on her choice to stay with him or remain a cupid.
Thanks for sharing
| itlnbrt chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
That was beautiful! I was impressed by the way you described Edward.
That is exactly how I picture him. Also, I just love he way something so
Romantic can come from a guy. This really was a very good one shot, and
you should be very proud of it.
Thank you for sharing!
| XeniiasOblivion chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
Oh My Fucking God!
this was so fricken amazing, as always you have completely blown me away with your writing..
this is such an amazing O/S idea, i just wish it was a full blown FF now!
i cant find the right words to describe how much i love this, and how the words made my hear flutter..
| MEL24FAN chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
Thus was really neat. I would live to see another chapter. I would like to know what Bella chose.
| baruka athena chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
Just a quick review to tell you that this story was beautiful. I loved it all the way through. And I am amazed at your ability to write from a girl's perspective (I know I have loads of troubles writing from a guy's).
Thanks for sharing this story with us.
| webiegirl chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
hell J. that was really a kick ass o/s !
i am not big on o/s b/c i always want more, and this is the first thing i have read aside of twbb of urs! so i really must say ur good...lol
i do hope u follow it up one day w/ one more chp. to see what happens if and when she kills her self, can she go on w/ life w/ out her brother?
| JLalways chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
A lovely sexy fairytale! Roman remins me of Emmett!
| wht it do chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
dammm...i lyk dis stry shit iz ht...yo buddy ikw yu dnt knw me nd all but do me a fvr wen i says keep wrytn pah-lez!…lol
| ZiggaZigAhh chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
This was truly a wonderful story. I would love to read a second chapter sometime, just to see how everything plays out for these two.
| FunkoFictionSlut95 chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
| Walker77 chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
Wow really ur leaving it there ahhhh have to have more have to know if she kills herself, please cont when u have a free min. If that exsists lol
| SparkleQ chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
Congratulations! I voted for this story and I am delighted to find out that YOU were the author. I just knew it. Its not a surprise - I love your writing and hope that you will one day, come back to this story because its really a wonderful story line. keep writing - I'll be looking forward to all your future writings!