Wow that was different and very beautiful

I can understand why you won the public vote, that was a nice and neat little story.

Something different. I enjoyed it. :)

Very refreshing.

I can see why you won... wonderfully written Enthralling really. Not like anything else I have read in the fandom. Great storyline and plot and I could not stop reading, almost wet myself, LOL cuz I wanted to finish and see what happened... Looking forward to reading your others as well. KimiD

Hi, any chance if that concluding chapter?

it is strange to hear a man say "I think I love you" right before
penetration...
not sure that was the right time plus, not sure if he is sure of his feelings
when he says "I think"
I wouldn't be so quick to become a mortal esp if Tanya was the
"love of his life"...
I would like to be the love of his life if I was going to give everything up
to become a human...
nah, I think I would just stay a goddess and try to find a way to allow him to
live among the gods and goddesses, not the other way around...imho.

I had a lot of fun reading this! I really like the plot and the twists and turns!

I likeeeeee! :)
xxx

This was indeed awesome!

The end of it sounds so gruesome haha After the whole love confession, it came as an abrupt "Whoa!" But I loved the story- super sweet, albeit a tad sad at times.

This was terrific. I loved it.

That was so sweet! I loved it. By the way, it would be great if you added another chapter.

cute

Loved it :)

This was so awesome! It's unfortunate that there's not another chapter for this story to conclude ...yeah, I could guess and make up the rest of the story, but I'm not too good with that...I want Bella to tell him who/what she is and have them talk about their possible future together...well, thanks for writing and sharing the wonderful story! :)