Reviews for Trusting The Enemy
kiwimoonelmo chapter 12 . 4/2/2011
This was a great story.I loved how the brothers were so
Mzzmarie chapter 12 . 12/27/2010
Love the story girl!

Usually I don't tend to like new characters intorduced to the storylines (I'm pretty boring/classic when it comes to SPN), but I loved the way that you wrote about the brothers! They served as a great (and often funny) parallel for the boys!

Great ending by the way - The one thing I want to really highlight about this chapter is the way that you developed the setting. You were so descriptive that I could completely picture the scene: "in the cool shade of a crescent moon, shrouded in misty darkness, Dean parked the Impala in the midst of some tress, overlooking a gabbling brook. It seemed a peaceful place to stop after everything that had happened, somewhere quiet for them to say their goodbyes." - very fitting!

*xoxo
monkeymuse chapter 12 . 12/20/2010
love it please do more with the twins
luckypixi chapter 12 . 12/19/2010
Aw...sad to see it end! :C

Btw, you spelt 'favourite' wrong at the end...just so you know :D

Hope to see more of the Twins soon! :D

:)

Me

xxxx
FrostedFeathers chapter 12 . 12/19/2010
Loved it, it was a brilliant ending to a brilliant story, cant wait to c wat u cum up with nxt XD
CeCe Away chapter 12 . 12/19/2010
This was a very fun story. I enjoyed it very much, happyday girl. Keep writing.
Thorny Hedge chapter 12 . 12/19/2010
I'm sorry to see it end.

Were Koby and Dexter based on anyone?
monkeymuse chapter 11 . 12/18/2010
looved it Go Dex Saving the day he rocks
CeCe Away chapter 11 . 12/18/2010
Tons of great action. Loved how Koby saved Sam at the end, though he didn't want to kill the vampire. And then Dex in turn saved him from Josh. Looking forward to more.
luckypixi chapter 11 . 12/18/2010
This was great...poor Dexter :C

Can't wait for more! :D

Me

xxxx
monkeymuse chapter 10 . 12/12/2010
outstanding poor dex and koby!
monkeymuse chapter 9 . 12/4/2010
outstanding updata! i loved it loving Dex more and more poor baby got nadded
luckypixi chapter 9 . 12/4/2010
Oooh...poor Dexter :C He's my fave Twin :P

Loved this...can't wait for more!

Me

xxx
monkeymuse chapter 8 . 12/2/2010
I think this was a great chapter. It showed us more of Koby and Dex who I am very much starting to like. I hope that we get to see more of them. I would also love to see them protect each other much like Sam and Dean one of them kill one of the other vamps and see that the others just want to hurt them and they are not friends at all. That way we can keep the vamps with the boys.
Thorny Hedge chapter 8 . 12/2/2010
I'm really enjoying this. Poor Koby!
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