Reviews for Percys Execution
Mauryn chapter 1 . 7/30/2015
I like this, though it's still sad to see John die. Thank you for sharing your story with us.
MakorraLove97 chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
A bit of grammatical and spelling errors, but otherwise this was really interesting! I'm so happy Percy dies. And through the mouse! Awesome. :)
stevieLUVSAlex chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
Mmm... this is pretty good. Im glad you still killed John, not that I dont cry everytime I see or watch it happen on film or read it in the book, but it was his release and he deserved to be free of that.

Nice work... thanks for sharing. D
Kasent and Medeth chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Not bad, just a little short. try to dwar it out and describe more, esspecially how the gaurds would react to coffees being let go.
TheSswede chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
This litte story made me want to watch The Green Mile again. It really is an extraordinary movie and what you wrote, even though it was short, is really good! :)