Reviews for Who Do You Think You Are
sdbubbles chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
Aw, I get it now. "You're going to catch a cold, from the ice inside your soul." That's a line in the song, right? And you said that Ziva thought Eli would die from the ice in his soul. I get it, and I absolutely love this. When you know the song, it makes sense, and the emoion is powerful. Great fic!

Sarah x
TWHATT18 chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
continue this and make it into a TIVA STORY!
RiverPhoenix chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Good imagery, but the tenses are out. If you can tighten up the grammar, this would be even more powerful and convincing.

Re suing without a disclaimer...it's so surely its a given that the author doesnt own anything, and there's nothing in the guidelines about requiring a disclaimer either. That's what commonsense tells me, but then, commonsense and the law don't always go hand in hand :)
fukitimout chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
That was really deep and really good. Keep up the good work! And i totally agree with you about how depressing it is that there is no NCIS tonight. Oh well...