Reviews for Fragile Monster
Carla Gasperoni chapter 1 . 2/15/2017
Wow!
HEARTBROKENREADE chapter 1 . 6/16/2015
What did EdWaRd do...
CCBTH chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
I didnt like this so much... i mean im all for a little darkward but bella dying is boooooo.. and i didnt like his monster voice..he was like the worlds biggest douche...but..you did give me a warning and it was categorized as tragedy so...good writing though
moved to siberia chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
ye gods! grabbed by the goulies, great job!
Cullen Concession chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
Holy Hell! What an ending!
Jackie K Paper chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
Both dark and humourous - nice :)
Inactivityispermanent chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
okay, the bit the dust bit at the end made me laugh, possibly no the right reaction, but that's jsut me. As for the rest of it, I loved it! Poor Edward! I want to give him a hug. I did like how she took care of that part herself, that would totaly make sence for her to do that. Loved it :)

Chelle
Vajanet chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
wow - just wow. Very dark - but very well told. I really liked it.
twirob chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
yes i enjoyed this story all be it grewsome
RosaBella75 chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
Bravo, Jo! The Hanibal slurping got me! *shudders* Beautiful dispair, the emptyness and numb outreach to him mother really affected me. I can tell I'm gonna get misty eyed everytime I think about it in the next few days! ;D

His inner demon was a right bastard and was impossible to ignore he was so present. Just well done, bb!

Thanks for sharing this bit of the Dark with us!
djsmommie chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
I love a good romp on the darkside
TexasTwilight77 chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
This was like watching a train wreck. I couldn't stop reading. Disturbingly, I loved it. Great job. ;)
KatieBMizzou chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
Interesting story, I think this is the only story in the copetition that branches from the original saga. Poor Bella, poor Edward. I hate that stupid monster! I like how the end is ambiguous, did the monster win? Will Edward end them both? Good story, thanks for sharing.
Kare831 chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
WOW! What a twist in the honeymoon scene of BD! But what will our Edward do to remove himself from his monstrous life? Momma Esme will not be a happy camper when she gets that note
Jancullenfever chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
"Ducks go quack, cows go moo. You'll stick it in and she'll go ooh!"

This made me chuckle..before my heart started thrumming in my chest ,yes,you warned us ..but...my god..Bella dies !

You took a hell of a chance writing this..well done.. I think

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