Reviews for What if?
Guest chapter 2 . 3/2/2014
What are flames or cookies
Nich.Jay chapter 7 . 4/24/2013
y u no update
Atramentous StygianIron chapter 7 . 4/20/2012
A very well written story.

Please continue!
pucflek chapter 6 . 9/15/2011
Hey its not bad. and if i could tell it is original too
SayHappy chapter 7 . 12/7/2010
hahah lol i love that part :: back back. dont make me tell you again!.. yes thats right back into your thingk about wht you've done... sooo are we done becaues yup, .:: lol i dont know if that was right but i was awesome in the movie i though that fishlags was sooo funny looking did you see ruffnuts face it was aoo O.O yup yup good times good times xD
Shigiya chapter 7 . 12/7/2010
cool chapter dude:)
CrystleIceFire chapter 7 . 12/7/2010
Love it please update soon!
Sgt. Nolisten chapter 7 . 12/7/2010
Oh I LOVED that scene in the movie! If there was ever a time that a face screamed "MIND FUCKED", that would be the pinicle of staments there.
SayHappy chapter 6 . 11/30/2010
i like it but you keep messing up ruff and tuffs lines... but besides that AWESOME! poat more soon
mdizzle chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
Little bit of constructive criticism here: it can't roar in agony and be unconscious at the same time

other than that it's fine
CrystleIceFire chapter 6 . 11/21/2010
Hey Love it,its great really. Amazin'. Keep it up, its great.
Shigiya chapter 6 . 11/20/2010
great chapter dude, cant wait to the next one.:)
Sgt. Nolisten chapter 6 . 11/19/2010
Toothless would be a good point to talk from, but other than those three, I don't think they'd be good.
Rakaziel chapter 4 . 11/5/2010
I really like your story.

The new Hiccup is interesting and you write him very in character, and Astrid is really well in character too. And you captured the whole social dynamics very well and wrote them very realistic.

I am really curious how you will continue and how the relationships between Astrid, Hiccup and Toothless will develop.
Maui Girl 808 chapter 4 . 11/4/2010
So she thinks. I can't wait to read more! This story is gettin' very exciting!
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