Reviews for Starting from Scratch |
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![]() ![]() Such great dialogue between the guys. Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fun story to read and oh so true! Love those two |
![]() ![]() ![]() A delight to read:-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was really funny and you've got them on point. Steve's got a Hawk's eye and Danny has a rough time admitting what he did for Steve. I like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job on this ep. I so miss the earlier season when it was JUST THE FOUR of them. Or Danny and Steve argument weren't so mean like. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. I miss season 1. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love, love, love the banter between these two. It could easily come straight from the show you have captured the characters and their relationship so well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. really enjoyed it. i am still laughing at the banter between the two. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it. You do Danny ranting so well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perfect! :D |
![]() ![]() LOOL! Loved the story 3 Somehow I did not review it the first time I read it, so I have to do it now ;-) I could totally imagine this scene playing in the show, it would have been great. I was actually a bit disappointed in the show, when they did not even acknowledge it, regarding, that Danny is soooooo keen on reminding Steve, that he CAN'T pull such stunts, but then he goes all James Bond himself :-P Well, like I and really all of the other reviewers said: Great story, great characterization, great banter, great dialogues, great inner thoughts ;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL! Oh My Gosh! That was so spot on! I really enjoy your writting! Great job! Could so see that conversation happening! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm later than most when it comes to reading your work. It's so nice when other reviewers refer us newbies because that makes it a lot easier to get to the quality writing. Anyway, I was actually hoping this would happen on the show. Because when Danny went all James Bond on that plane I was so hoping for some kind of acknowledgement. Your piece supplied just that. Maybe I'm just a fluff person, but I just love reading the banter. You capture both characters so well I could practically see the scene play out in my head. Great writing. Keep going! |