|Reviews for Even the Strong Shall Fall|
| samlavie chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
Aw that's so cute!
| Ghost Wulf chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Yay for rereading! And actually reviewing this time. :P I believe my first comments were over IM for this one and I don't remember what I said. lol
I love Lenalee! She's such a caring person, and I love how devoted she was to Allen in trying to make him feel better.
Also, good job on making Bak's voice sound different in the journal entries. :) I love that guy. :D And man, I need to reread this series... sometime. XP
I think the very ending is my favorite. The last line feels so much like Lenalee-the note of peace that she would want to end on, even in the midst of losing a war and everything else. Great job! I do love this oneshot :D
| JadeOokami chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
That really WAS depressing XDD;
I personally am not a fan of first person (Particularly so when used for a character that the person does not own), but it wasn't so bad, reading this. Admittedly, some of Lenalee's core personality seemed sort of missing (Which is why I don't like first person much, since it's so hard to use).
However, I did like your descriptions. Also, that you didn't go overboard with said discriptions. I think either Allen would have exploded before becomeing lifeless, or Lenalee would have when he went lifeless, but that's just me.
But I did like it It was... well, not CUTE, because it was depressing, but the ending was nice and melancholy.