|Reviews for The Lost Civilization|
| squeezycheesey chapter 51 . 3/7
Good god cliffhangers man! I had to read 3 long chapters in a matter of a week because for some reason I stopped getting email notifications. But great writing, man. I hope the next chapter comes out soon
| Chicktopuss5000 chapter 51 . 3/6
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| Thomas A. Hawk chapter 51 . 3/3
Well, that was certainly one hell of a fight! I'm really impressed with your story, and I have to say, there was honestly no better way to finish off the Alatreon than that. Still, I have some theories about how Levin may have survived... but just in case they are completely correct, I'll keep them to myself. I haven't reviewed in a while, but I have nothing but praise for the entire tale. Can't wait to see what you've got cooking next!
Tom A. Hawk
| ultimatemh chapter 51 . 3/2
This chapter is... Indescribable to me, I honestly don't know how to put what I think about this chapter into words, all I can say is that it was well written.
| giodan chapter 51 . 3/2
| giodan chapter 50 . 3/2
my dear Brachydios! i just love this monster! i got full armor and long blade from him!
| Charlie019 chapter 51 . 3/1
And so it ends at last.
I remember the first time I came upon this story, Levin and Elle managed to pass the hunter's test and were returning back to Borma.
Though I was hoping more people die stopping the Alateron. Guess watching Game of Thrones kind of makes one morbid and cynic, as I was expecting someone to be suddenly killed off without warning.
Plus the whole time everyone was talking about how deadly the Elder Dragon was, so I kept wondering if half of them would end up being killed.
So it was kind of a bummer to see that only Levin died.
Gah, too much Game of Thrones and reading dark stories.
Anyway, it's been a long run, I know it's been quite a while since I reviewed, but just wanted to say something now that the story is ending.
So, there you go.
| Liquidblaze97 chapter 51 . 3/1
I would like you to thank you for writing one of the most fantastic stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading. This chapter was amazing and me more all teary-eyed. I had a feeling the Alatreon's demise would come about via switch axe phial explosion ever since Levin got the weapon. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
| Ancestor's Dragon chapter 51 . 3/1
Wow, that was... pretty damn awesome. Great job with this chapter, it was excellently done. The only thing I had an issue with was how ridiculously powerful the phial seemed to be, but I think I'll chalk it up to it having a super bad reaction with the Alatreon's energies too.
And if Levin isn't alive, you're getting a wyvernfire to the arse next time we play 3U together.
Anyways, great job again. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
| modeluchosen1 chapter 51 . 3/1
| A Jack Frost Guy chapter 51 . 3/1
Burr, it's been a bit of a while since I left a review behind.
So... going through the tally, we've got a dead Stygian Zinogre, a dead Brachidios, and the Alatreon has fallen at what was most likely a heavy price. That's... that's almost bittersweet, but more of sad, 'least for me.
... well, moving on from the sadness for now, the analysis proper. Once again, the writing was superb. The details? Fabulous. Grammar? Flawless (or nearly, I slip up every now and then so I can't always tell). And emotions and thoughts of the characters... I'm not gonna go there. It's sadness territory on that end, regardless if Levin is gone or not. ;-;
Once again, thanks for the great work, I await the conclusion, and... what's the Switch Axe Levin uses again? I think I'm gonna craft it in honour of the man, if Portable 3rd has it at least...
P.S. Wait, I almost forgot, what of the Dark Metal?
| Hoenn Master96 chapter 51 . 2/28
And so the Alatreon dies, and seemingly, Levin as well. After a long and hard-fought battle, the most epic way to die is discovered, as well as the battle to survive against nearly impossible odds, and the shredding of Ellie's heart besides. Farewell, Levin; you shall be missed, although I won't be sure you're dead until I see either an ash pile, or some other proof that you didn't survive.
Signed: Hoenn Master, forever a patriot.
| IDKTellMeWhatYouThink chapter 51 . 2/28
Oh. My. Gawd. I am basically at the edge of breaking down. This was a really, really intense chapter. Thankfully, the two monsters - Brachy and Stygian - are dead. And the Alatreon is as well. But that very part where Levin was being torn to shreds from the Dragon energy, was what did it. He basically did the unthinkable. Killed the Black Beast and saved his friends' lives. I definitely want to read the next chapter. Will the hunter find something of Levin? Or nothing at all? I'd be impressed if the crystal's base had enveloped him at the last second, sending him into sleep for who knows how long.
| SG-Kai chapter 51 . 2/28
I love you for this. And hate you for that cliffhanger.
How does it feel having come this far ? I've seen several writers give up or become too busy to finish their stories. TLC is going to hold the top spot for quite some time in the MH section with by far the most words, reviews, faves, and follows.
| StattStatt chapter 51 . 2/28
An update. And I am on too much of an awe-induced daze to write anything witty or anything of the like.
Holy damn and everything that is holy and unholy! That was simply... I really, don't know what to write. Everything, EVERY, SINGLE, THING was simply one of the most amazing things I ever experienced. I am NOT exaggerating. When I reached the end, I started applauding loudly.
Every single element, the different fight scenes, the way you split them up, made them play out, and finally, the endings, were in my opinion, absolutely flawless. If there was ever a MH movie, or anime, BASE IT FROM THIS! That would undoubtedly be one of the best things ever created.
And the very end, a lone sacrefice, the last one to die, both by the hands of the monster that has plagued the land for so long, and by his own willing actions.
ANd those words from FMA, truer words could not be said for this moment.
You are undoubtedly one of my absolute favorite authors on this site.
Once again, I applaud to you. Good luck with the writing of the final chapter, and everything else, keep up the AMAZING work, looking forward for MUCH, much more from you!