Reviews for The Official Fanfiction University of Middleearth |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Pipe weed? C'mon guys it's totally Tolkien. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lina isn't all that clewver is she? Let's see, who is someone who likes you and really likes gold? Gasp! It couldn't be...Gimli! What is this madness!? You know a story is good when a witch wall and a living bread fall in love :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() The headmaster is Tolkien isn't it? Awesome! This whole fic is reminding me of Harry Potter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the way you inserted yourself. You're miss cam right? She's boss! There aren't words for how much I love this fix :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() First of all, fic is BEYOND AMAZING so far. Love it to pieces! Secondly, use the hordes of lotr fangirls as an army to take over middle earth. Just saying ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well another chapter well done |
![]() ![]() The Urple Bandets are hilarious once more! -The Archduke |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ya I hate being sick too. -The Archduke |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel the characters pain. AAAAAAAAGGGGGGGHHHHHHH! Bad mental images! -The Archduke |
![]() ![]() ![]() Evil minions are sometimes the best part of a villain. Just a random thing I'm throwing out there because I don't have much to put into a proper review of this chapter. -The Archduke |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok this chapter was hilarious! Ragna the Urple! How do you come up with these things? They are hilarious! I am still laughing! -The Archduke |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bad mental images! -The Archduke |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok I will be brutally honest with you here. This story seems to be concentrating more on your romance and less on your original plot line, which was that they are learning how to write good fan fiction! Seriously was this chapter needed? It had absolutely nothing parttaining to the plot and really just seemed unneeded, the reinvented movie names were interesting and funny but you seem to go on tangents. A lot. It just seems like this is less of a learning expirience and more of a weird dream that I would have when I went to sleep on a full stomach. I like the idea it is just, and this is fully my opinion and nothing else, your delivery leaves much to be desired. I enjoy the fact that she is finding someone she would actually like instead of just going for Legolas and feel that your romance does parts go along with the plot it is just you put too much focus on it rather than the hilarious slap stick and classroom time that you could develope so much better. Not trying to insult you or anything, just trying to be honest. -The Archduke P.S. there are more ways of writing romance rather than throw ing the two love interests in bed with one another all the time |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know this was written after Deathly Hallows came out, but that "Always" made me cry all the same. Damn you, Lina! …sniff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, God. This was amazing! Girl falls into Middle-earth and ends up with GIMLI-? …I think that was the sound of a million tropes simultaneously exploding :) |