Reviews for NCIS six feet under
crazychick99 chapter 3 . 5/18/2011
sweetie do me a favour :) UPDATE ! love you xoxoxo 3
crazychick99 chapter 1 . 12/11/2010

i know you can update at ur dads u told me u could so PLEASE can you ... coz you love me :D xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx ly S
Betherzz chapter 3 . 11/24/2010
good chapter ;) Cant wait to see what comes next
MillaMayhem chapter 3 . 11/24/2010
Good good.

you do well Gillybean
MillaMayhem chapter 2 . 11/23/2010
You've captured their character perfectly!

Not a big fan of NCIS fanfics but I like yours. REALLY!

but might I ask why they're handling the case if the victims are kids?

It's just that don't they only handle cases with like marines and what not?
MillaMayhem chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
Hey Gillybean :)

Good story but at the start you made it seem like tony wasn't the narrator by saying:

"Tony looked up from the corps"

By the way you also spelt CORPSE wrong :)

I love critiscising your work :D

see you at school :))
Betherzz chapter 2 . 11/15/2010
good chapter, cant wait to see what comes next
hundan chapter 2 . 11/13/2010
Your writting has improved from the last chapter, Wow 52 bodies thats alot of killings. I hope they shoot the person who did this, until next time...
BritMum chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
I'm intrigued. How did McGee get up the tree? ;o)

Also, intrigued to see where this goes. :D
hundan chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
I like where this is going the plot sounds good, a few spelling mistakes and stuff like that, maybe re-read your work before posting it. But yes you seem to have a very creative story idea, update soon
zatl chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
Great start. :) I can't wait to find out what happens.