Reviews for You Deserve Better
Silverblade1 chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
I liked it! I always like reading about Ed being protective of Roy. :)
Kyu-Momo chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
Awwww...! That was great! :D
itsatruemiracle chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
this was so nice I love it
Minibit chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
This was sweet but... pardon the term, pointnless.

There was a conflict in this story - Roy comes home exhausted and it does not equal happy Edward, but nothing is done about it. There's no climax to the exposition and rising action, and as such it leaves me thinking 'okay... so what?'

Finish this story, it deserves it, and you write well.
Bloody White Rabbit chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
I loved it! It was such a great read! :)
sorryimahopelessromantic chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
awwwww so cutexD just loved it3
Dragon Spy chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
MOOOOOOOOOORE ...please?
UP2L8 chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
This is a very interesting introspective piece. An IC look under the surface of this relationship from Ed's POV. Will we get a peek at Roy's POV to balance this out? *crosses fingers*
silvers-edge chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
Awww, poor over worked Roy needs a break. Ed should kidnapp him to a spa or something to get him to rest
HoliMoliCow chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
It was very cute, but it wasn't as smooth as your usual stuff. I'm not sure why, but it just didn't flow... sorry for crit, but it was adorable anyway :3