|Reviews for Abluo|
| CdB55 chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
| Supasoph chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
| Angelsheart85 chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
i am so grateful to you for giving us this story! And U re not the only one swept off your feet by the two of them and the energy between them. It is truly sad sometimes when some good couples like them were actually not turned to be couples in the shows, truly a waste of a wonderful opportunity but alas...
Anyway thats why we have eager fans to give their contribution and open a whole new universe through the form of fictions :)
Thank you all over again :D
| RaceTheWind10 chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Hot damn. I don't often find fic with decent descriptions of dominance and submission, and by "decent" i mean subtle, considered and well written with a clear understanding that power play need NOT be all "Mistress this" and "slave" that. So much kink is crude and boorish. This is lovely. Hot, but more importantly, a lovely treatment of two characters in a moment of need and want. Its also realistic without being clinical. A nice balance. :)
| breakawayslingshot.co.nz chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Awesome! Part 2?
| Timetraveling Archaeologist chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
Not my normal cup of tea, I love femslash, but haven't really read this pairing until now. Now I think I'll be looking for more of it.
Thanks for the story
| Zenheim Panda chapter 1 . 11/25/2010
I absolutely adored this! Great job. I would love it if you wrote a sequel to this where Helen was on top; you're quite talented. Thanks for this!
| Rain Addict CM chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
wow! nicely written! makes me want to go find a Magnus of my own!
| rebecca blackden chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Yowsa's and wow and hot. But also so incredibly sweet. I loved that. I can so see Magnus being an incredibly considerate lover...ya know with all the practice, as you pointed out. Kate is so beautifully vulnerable in this, it's just touching. (yeah sappy I know.) Thanks so much for this, wonderfully done.
| Divinia Serit chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
YAY! You posted it! And it's gotten great reviews XD Lovely story and I can't wait for more of your stuff! The character dynamics are always flawless. You're the best! *snuggles*
| Lily Rose-Petals chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
Wow, that didn't feel squicky like I thought it would. Well done! I can actually see them together in the Pavor world, although in the show's timeline...not so much. I like how you made Magnus her mentor as well as her lover without it seeming, idk, inappropriate or something. :)
| DelPaz chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
This was beautiful. I love the etymology of the title and how it plays into the story as well. The portrayal of the women was just connected enough to canon to make it entirely believable as a potential for the future.
Can you please PLEASE write a follow up? With your ending, it looked as if you were setting yourself up for a part 2 but in case you weren't... Change your mind! There is not nearly enough stories on this pair out there. Yours is the best I've seen. Start a trend!
| melissaadams22 chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
*Shivers* They're talking snow here tomorrow night, just a dusting but REALLY now. *Frowns at the clouds*
It's a good thing your fiction is out there or I'd be CRAZY!
GREAT job, truly great. As a reward we're gonna send you to a nice virtual warm island somewhere...pack the sunblock and the laptop or something so you can keep writing of course. LOL
Fantastic, magnificent, terrific, wonderful, stupendous, great, job truly!
Thank you much for your work,
| balladofserenity chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
Wow and double wow!
I often find slash pairs as slash for no reason but this work...there is nothing smutty about it (well i guess there is a little :p).
It was such a powerful pairing. I found the pavo context almost unnecessary (especially with the development of Kate so far in the series). The characterisation of both Helen and Kate was so simple and natural, just an extension of who we as an audience have come to know.
It is just so beautiful, both the story and how you have written it. So very beautiful.
Thank you so much for sharing this and i hope other readers appreciate the wonderful work that you have done!
P.S. I should mention that i rarely review work these days BUT i just needed to tell you how much i loved it!
| Goose197 chapter 1 . 11/3/2010