|Reviews for Loving you|
| new moongirl chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
i like it! :D very sweet!
| PercyMoffatt chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Dude, if you wrote some of this while waiting for the bus, your writing skills are legendary :D Some Lily and Sev stories are so indepth and unrealisitic, but yours was really sweet and...well realistic.
p.s. Since I reviewed, does this mean I get Sirius sent to my place? lolz
| inactiveacount121212 chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
I absolutely loved it! :)
| Inuboy1000 chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
This is amazing. Thank you... this is freaking incredible.
| ninaxw chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
Great story, and only minor mistakes. I can see you prefer slash, but you should write more of these. All in all, I liked it very much.
| ChibiLady chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
Oooh, a very nice one-shot, got a little steamy there!
| SecretPain121208 chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
I really like it so far.
Don't worry about the grammer, I'm sure I could use some work too ;P
It's hard to find a good sev/lily story with a decent plotline cuz a lot of people don't like him :(
Maybe check out my story "the discombobulating adventures of Ceraphina" if you get t he time.
Great story, thanks!
| LittleSilverSquirrel chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
Aww:) That's a cute story, and don't worry, your grammar isn't that bad:)