Reviews for You make me smile Kataang
HiddenKindness chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
I liked it! It's short and sweet. It's a good idea, so maybe for future reference you could stretch it out a bit, to make it longer, but it's still great.

One thing though, for dialogue, there's punctuation needed. For example:

"Hey there" should be "Hey there."

etc. etc.

Keep up the good work!