|Reviews for Fantasy Over Reality|
| EraEon chapter 35 . 5/19/2015
I absolutely loved and hated your story. I loved Whitney and felt her pain. I cried, grew angry, laughed, and so much more. I really wanted Whitney to end up with Harry but Harry's behavior with one day kissing Whitney and the next dating Cho really pissed me off. I was angry and jealous on Whitney's part. I hated seeing (reading) her pain. I connected with her character so much. She is never given enough credit by the others. I suspected her and Harry wouldn't end up together but her death shocked and saddened me. I don't actually hate your story just what Whitney went through. I loved your writing style and point of views. You kept the story interesting and I just wish there was more to read. Those three years you spent were spent very well. This story is amazing and I look forward to any other stories you write about Twilight/Harry Potter. Best of wishes and please write more soon! Preferably with a happy ending ;) just kidding this is your writing and your ideas make it so original and real. Okay I'm babbling a lot...bye! :)
| Kelskels030501 chapter 13 . 10/24/2014
i love how harry is starstruck when Whitney kisses him adn he just noddes
| Guest chapter 33 . 8/24/2014
Im crying it was sad but i love the ending xoxo
| Minty chapter 35 . 6/20/2014
NO FAAAA I THOUGHT SHE WOULD HAVE ENDED UP WITH SOMEONE! Btw i loved this fanfic so much!
| HealingRose chapter 5 . 4/10/2014
I like the concept of this story but the wording and the flow of it all is a bit messy and all over the place. The tone is a bit childish but all in all I like it.
| Hermione Katniss Cullen chapter 27 . 1/7/2014
Oh my god I love a very potter musical too. Good story
| unknown chapter 35 . 10/25/2013
this was a great story
| nightskyandglowinglanterns chapter 35 . 10/12/2013
amazing ! I was a bit sceptical at some parts but this was a thoroughly enjoyable read .
| Black chapter 35 . 7/23/2013
U r a great writer but be careful with this type of writing. People either luv it or hate it
| Booklove992001 chapter 12 . 7/18/2013
OMG! I love this story and anyone who doesn't can just keep their mouth shut! They don't have to read it if they don't want but i love it!
| arianakaylani chapter 11 . 6/27/2013
Hey...I just now realized this but...if Alice saw Whitney get crucioed shouldn't she have seen who did it? And if so...why didn't Alice tell the Order it was Umbridge?
| Crazy as a Cheshire Cat chapter 35 . 6/26/2013
I've read this whole story. It was excellent, and your writing style did change (a little). To be honest, this was really the ending I was expecting. Between the Little Dragon notes and the POV this chapter was in, I figured she wasn't able to tell the story anymore. Then we got to the last sentence and I realized I was right. This wasn't a waste of the three years you spent on it, I wish I could concentrate on my stories better. Thank you for getting the inspiration all that time ago, and thank you for finishing it with an actual ending.
| HP-TMI-TS chapter 29 . 6/15/2013
please dont make this story a B/E fanfic! its a really good story and the B/E would bring flames and bring it down
oh and btw i give your story out of
| dracobby chapter 35 . 6/10/2013
This was such an amazing perspective of the whole twilight harry potter cross over scenario.. Though the beginning was a bit sketchy im glad I read on because here I found one of my favourite crossovers.. Simply I loved it! Good luck!
| AliceCullen3 chapter 35 . 6/8/2013