Reviews for Broken
Sunshine-Midnight123 chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
Great!
G chapter 2 . 8/24/2012
Do a follow up?! Where they are at a pack meeting an everyone finds out kind of thing?! Absolutely loved it! :D xo
Capp'n chapter 2 . 1/16/2012
I loved this story. I would have loved to find out the Pack's reactions too. You should do another chapter.
shouldabeenblonde chapter 2 . 9/19/2011
Great job. I love how believable this was. Brilliant
Lita of Jupiter chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
I have been reading and rereading this story like crazy, it is sohot and shows such a soft side of both characters, I really loved this and I hope one day you write the reactions this is bringing about
Lita of Jupiter chapter 2 . 8/28/2011
honey, I worship this, how vulnerable Leah is and how perceptive Jake can be is shown really well I love the pairing and though this seems to be a oneshot (well twoshot really) I kinda wan o see how the explosion within the pack would be due to what haooened here...
OPOSOJOJ chapter 2 . 7/26/2011
Cute.
Tara Maria chapter 2 . 5/28/2011
Loved it. The lemon was hot!
ABarbieStory chapter 2 . 2/28/2011
wonderful story!
cklovewinter chapter 2 . 2/6/2011
Loved the story! I'm a big Blackwater fan :)
Tilius chapter 2 . 1/15/2011
Interesting story.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/5/2010
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Guest chapter 2 . 12/5/2010
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Guest chapter 2 . 12/5/2010
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recey2010 chapter 2 . 12/3/2010
awesome lemon great story love to see where you r taking this Update soon
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