Reviews for Broken Wings
scarlet8279l chapter 2 . 12/24/2013
So cool! I really like what I've read so far! Please continue!
Nkosasana chapter 3 . 4/3/2011
Great chapter!

I always found Nef the most interesting of the Soul-Eaters, but my

favourite is Seshru. Write loads more, you put Michelle Paver to

shame, you're so good.

Write loads more, the waiting is killing me!

ASongInMyHead chapter 4 . 4/1/2011
I... I love this.
El of the Wild Dog Clan chapter 3 . 3/28/2011
Amazing! I like it more than the real thing.

The characters are really deap with a real kind of credibility to them.

Please write loads more, and may the clan guardian write with you!
Lalala chapter 3 . 3/15/2011
I love this story! It's so descriptive and original it's amazing! Please write more!
Alalalala chapter 3 . 3/15/2011
Your ideas are so original and interesting it's amazing! Please keep writing! Keep up the good work :)
HarveyHarveyHarvey chapter 3 . 12/19/2010
HarveyHarveyHarvey chapter 2 . 12/19/2010
Oh My

This is amazing
HarveyHarveyHarvey chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Damn I love Neb, I love her even more now
frozenskiing chapter 2 . 11/27/2010
cool story! its good, an i want you to keep writing loads! plz?
Blackwing of ShadowClan chapter 3 . 11/13/2010
is he going to turn them into tokoros or what ever their called
Blackwing of ShadowClan chapter 2 . 11/7/2010

Chapter titlesamazing


Word choiceamazing

Updatinghappy mossfire25
Halfcarrot chapter 2 . 11/6/2010

I love this!

I always thought that Nef was one of the most interesting Soul Eaters.

Great job!

Kavazya chapter 2 . 11/6/2010
Wow. This is turning into a really cool story! The characters are very interesting and mysterious, and have a very neat element of depth about them - its also extremely well-written. I'm so intrigued...
ASongInMyHead chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
Oooh, interesting! Are you continuing this? I hope you are. This is great, but you should try and increase the chapter length, if you continue.

Keep up the good work!