|Reviews for Child of Rapine|
| Apples of Blood chapter 37 . 5/29
That was fucking amazing. God, I stayed up till exactly 3:08 am to finish this marvelous piece of overwhelming feelings I began to read tonight. ;-; ｡ﾟ(ﾟДﾟ)ﾟ｡ ()b. (•ө•) (ӦｖӦ｡) (̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥ω̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥) So good ٩(๑๑)۶
| Kmaggio chapter 37 . 4/12
So good! Please keep writing these!
| KristenLynn chapter 37 . 9/21/2015
Saw your story rec'd on ADF today. Needed a bit of an escape and the summary intrigued me. a few hours later, here I am. Thanks for an interesting (and very different for me) read. Enjoyed it thoroughly.
| Guest chapter 20 . 6/6/2014
You are a master at middle aged dialect,
but I'm not.
I COULDN'T UNDERSTAND A FUCKING THING ROARKE SAID
| wherearethegoodpennames chapter 37 . 7/13/2013
This story was awesomeee and it deserves so many more reviews! I stayed up till five to read it! Thanks for sharing:)
| doctorg chapter 36 . 11/25/2012
I really like the charm, persuasiveness, and even playfulness of the demon here.
| doctorg chapter 35 . 11/25/2012
The demon beside him glanced up. Supercilious bastard, isn't he?
As well as the detail of the rules you've created for the duel.
| doctorg chapter 34 . 11/25/2012
This one was my favorite:
Seòbhrach Rubha's King still stared, goggle-eyed at the cold-eyed slip of a girl who sat with the poise of a queen before him—she would have been queen, he thought furiously—calmly slicing arguments from his hands.
| doctorg chapter 33 . 11/25/2012
Again, such a lovely description in so few words:
children were slumping, or weeping with weariness.
| doctorg chapter 32 . 11/25/2012
This was my favorite line:
He considered the Prince a moment, and then his chosen lover, weighed the degree of intelligence evidenced between them.
| doctorg chapter 31 . 11/25/2012
"You again," he growled, opening the door to the Prince.
| doctorg chapter 30 . 11/25/2012
I love the resolution to this...Tam and Iain to the rescue...with dancing girls!
| doctorg chapter 29 . 11/25/2012
He was careful with her, mindful of tenderness, yet demanded all of her be given over to his safekeeping. In return, all that he was, he poured into her.
| doctorg chapter 28 . 11/25/2012
Once again, the vividness of your description is great:
His face, lean and harsh, was tight, the flesh of it stretched taut over the rawboned frame of his bones. Eyes the color of a blade were locked on hers, searingly direct and intimately searching.
| doctorg chapter 27 . 11/25/2012
I love how you give Rapunzel a fierceness that shows she is a good match for him:
"Good," Rapunzel said, a vehemence to her words that made him blink. "They deserved it."