Reviews for The other Phantomhive
Mukuro234 chapter 2 . 5/6/2014
Hehe this is awesome lol... I quite enjoy this fic are u planning on continuing
DragonFire Princess chapter 2 . 2/11/2014
XD1411 chapter 2 . 1/24/2014
I was just thinking, 'What if Draco found out about Harry’s 'time slip' ability? I.E, he’s walking through the woods or somewhere where he won’t be spotted easily, then he witnesses the golden trio, Harry, Mione and Ron, time slip together. I’d bet he’d be so shocked he’d let out a gasp at the most, or mutter the ever infamous 'I’m teling my father about this!' line or stay completely silent to in shock to say or do anything! ' Hmm... *Go’s to thinking corner*
god of all chapter 2 . 10/9/2013
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
DaughterofDante chapter 2 . 9/14/2013
Interesting idea!
alexma chapter 2 . 5/21/2013
please update soon thanks
Sterben4 chapter 2 . 3/15/2013
This is awesome and kind a funny, is it still veing written or is it abandonded
Moonstar Daughter of Hades chapter 2 . 2/23/2013
I really like your idea. btw, Grell is spelled Grelle. (just lettin ya know ;) ) And aren't Ciel and Aloise enemies? 'cuz (spoiler) from what i remember, Ciel stabbed Aloise...
Paxloria chapter 2 . 5/23/2012
Ok, I'm really not sure what to say.

Everyone seems to be getting along AND taking things in stride.

Your the author so I guess you can do that.

You might want to work on line spacing. Your paragraphs are TOO compact.
The.darkness-in-our.hearts chapter 2 . 5/4/2012
This story is cute. I love the whole Harry has a childish side with Ciel. Hope to read more.
DarkFlameInfernal chapter 2 . 2/17/2012
love it
Shade O'Killer chapter 2 . 1/21/2012
There is a typo -by instead of boy - but you need to have people speak on a new line eg.

"Oh no!" Alois gulped.

"oh, now you've done it" Ciel said anxiously.

You have a very good story idea and I'm looking forward to more
Yin Long Nocturne chapter 2 . 9/7/2011
I've watched the first season of Kuroshitsuji and read/watched all the harry potter books/movies. and this was probably better than them both!
Rayne the Fox chapter 2 . 7/30/2011
WOOT! awsome i lke the story so far keep going!
AlloraSara132 chapter 2 . 7/20/2011
when will the next chapter be?
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