|Reviews for Dear diary|
| joy763 chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
so cute!i love it! its great and i want you to keep wrighting!
| Maxine chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
haha oh he is SO stupid
| LeaveItUnspoken chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
If you need a Beta for anything I will be willing to help if you need one :)
But if you already found one, then that is cool too!
I really liked this one! It's a shame the diary entries weren't longer, but then, when being on the crew to a ship, it's gonna be busy and she won' have the time. But great story, keep it up!
| Mia Vaan chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
OK, first things first, you need to get a beta reader.
I lost count of the amount of spelling and grammar mistakes in this. The plot's fine; some lines even had me cracking up laughing, but the grammar and spelling takes away from the plot. I almost stopped reading.
So either get a beta reader to correct the mistakes or correct them yourself.
I'm trying to help, before you judge me. So don't whine about constructive critisism; learn from it.
| person chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
that wars super cool! you have some speling mistakes, but i loved it you should make this into a story not just a oneshot!