Reviews for A Smoldering Flame
Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
That was kind of hot. Juto is so sexy, along with Crocell. I hope there's more yaoi between these two boys.
amerie chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
I have such a crush on Juto.
I'd love to read "playing with fire"
CsillaDream chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
THAT WAS HAWT! Like Crocell's fire hot C":
Please write more for this pairing if you can :3

-rushes off to read the sequel-

Aakasha chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
heheheheheheheeee. sorry, it's hard to contain. i love this game series and it's so hard to find any fanfiction for it. :( juto x crocell were my favorite for this game and it's exciting to find some stories for them. this was really cute too, BONUS! 3
Nephthys Snape chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Very well done. I really enjoyed it, and they were both kept in character very well. I was a little worried when I started looking for this pairing, that there wouldn't be much out there and that it wouldn't be very good if I did find it. I was only half right. I'm glad to see that there is at least one very good, and very delicious, story. I'm off to check out Playing With Fire now.
suchamystery chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
'It felt so good to be filled up like that again' ALL THAT FUCKING FROM ARGO RIGHT CROCELL aww yeah. anyway onto the review~ ONE COMPLAINANT ABOUT THE SMUT - needed more fire related puns. and dirty talk, but that's just my preference so maybe it shouldn't be a complaint. but the puns, bro. here I'll help... 'Juto buried himself deep within Crocell's heated caverns [Crocell seems the type to warm his manpassage with a fireball, no?] and moaned in relief. "My God, Crocell, you're a -insertitalics-fireball.' ... actually nvm that sounds like horrible porn from the 70s. GOOD JOB GURL. :3 I liked the ending, it was sweet and fluffy and all that good stuff that should come after smut. I would add constructive criticism, but all I have to say is longer smut and you've already fixed that. XD so um. that is the end of this stupidly long review of nothingness. :3
Salya chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
oh my... This is a great one-shot. _

I never thought of this pairing but now I live them. lol

Broken Headphones chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Hey, a Juto/Crocell fic! I was wondering if anyone had bothered to give this pairing a thought, since I have just met Crocell myself in the game. I new at it, but I still find this pairing quite adorable.

I think your writing is very good. The only slight problem I have with it is that you might have rushed through the sex scene a little bit. My only advice for that is try to lengthen it out by explaining a rush of emotions or something along the lines of that. It gives a little more life to the story.

But other than that, I thought it was well-written and really good. It's definitely going into my favorites.