|Reviews for A Smoldering Flame|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
That was kind of hot. Juto is so sexy, along with Crocell. I hope there's more yaoi between these two boys.
| amerie chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
I have such a crush on Juto.
I'd love to read "playing with fire"
| CsillaDream chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
THAT WAS HAWT! Like Crocell's fire hot C":
Please write more for this pairing if you can :3
-rushes off to read the sequel-
I"M NOT ALONE IN THIS SHIP XD
| Aakasha chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
heheheheheheheeee. sorry, it's hard to contain. i love this game series and it's so hard to find any fanfiction for it. :( juto x crocell were my favorite for this game and it's exciting to find some stories for them. this was really cute too, BONUS! 3
| Nephthys Snape chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Very well done. I really enjoyed it, and they were both kept in character very well. I was a little worried when I started looking for this pairing, that there wouldn't be much out there and that it wouldn't be very good if I did find it. I was only half right. I'm glad to see that there is at least one very good, and very delicious, story. I'm off to check out Playing With Fire now.
| suchamystery chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
'It felt so good to be filled up like that again' ALL THAT FUCKING FROM ARGO RIGHT CROCELL aww yeah. anyway onto the review~ ONE COMPLAINANT ABOUT THE SMUT - needed more fire related puns. and dirty talk, but that's just my preference so maybe it shouldn't be a complaint. but the puns, bro. here I'll help... 'Juto buried himself deep within Crocell's heated caverns [Crocell seems the type to warm his manpassage with a fireball, no?] and moaned in relief. "My God, Crocell, you're a -insertitalics-fireball.' ... actually nvm that sounds like horrible porn from the 70s. GOOD JOB GURL. :3 I liked the ending, it was sweet and fluffy and all that good stuff that should come after smut. I would add constructive criticism, but all I have to say is longer smut and you've already fixed that. XD so um. that is the end of this stupidly long review of nothingness. :3
| Salya Darken chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
oh my... This is a great one-shot. _
I never thought of this pairing but now I live them. lol
| Broken Headphones chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Hey, a Juto/Crocell fic! I was wondering if anyone had bothered to give this pairing a thought, since I have just met Crocell myself in the game. I new at it, but I still find this pairing quite adorable.
I think your writing is very good. The only slight problem I have with it is that you might have rushed through the sex scene a little bit. My only advice for that is try to lengthen it out by explaining a rush of emotions or something along the lines of that. It gives a little more life to the story.
But other than that, I thought it was well-written and really good. It's definitely going into my favorites.