|Reviews for The Will of the One|
| Alatum Laminis chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
Fantastic! The perfect blend of familial rivalry and love, as well as believable powers! Not only that, but you also managed to make things humorous!
Those kids are all as mischievous as their parents...which makes this a very credible story.
| wish i c0uld chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
OH. MY. GOD.
This story WIN
SO CUTE. I love the way you've layed out these new characters. Their behavior is interesting and the powers you have and haven't given them are believable. Their personalities work well together too. I love this SFM. You rock.
I don't know if it's really your style, but I would love to see a longer fic involving the 3 siblings. Or even just some simple Tavi/Kitai fluff. I'm not too picky. I just need more CA fic in my life!