Reviews for Uzumaki Chronicles: The Swirling Tides |
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![]() ![]() ![]() how on earth are you THIS fucking bad at writing children characters?! why the fuck is a 6 year old talking like a fully grown adult? |
![]() ![]() ![]() holy fuck the dialogue is bad. how the fuck is a 5 year old taking and acting like that? its absolutely retarded levels of bad writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() just checking in, haven't seen ya in about a decade on here and was scrolling through old favorites. where ever you are and whatever you're doing. I hope you're doing well. signed, a reader who loved your story! i remember the website you made to post more about it and all that back in the day lol so thanks for writing, this was probably around the 3rd or so long format fic i picked up back in the day! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn. That's messed up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue this story i really want to see the rest of it! This story is amazing! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() good |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking forward to the next Chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The added thing with Mito and her brother plot really killed it for me ... would have still kept reading but truthfully that killed it for me. Though I did wonder about Mito now that i think about it... to bad you didn't continue your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far found the first thing I dislike about the story ... Mito's condition and the brother thing ... ... ,,,, Xo |
![]() ![]() ![]() nonononononononononono no more explicity, ok it is toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much, please don't I am skipping evry lemon scene but there are too much |
![]() ![]() ![]() please no more lemons |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sage Mode is all summoners ability and Phoenix and Dragon are awesome |