I feel a bit sick reading about Mito's torture... and apparently all three of team minato are stupid/evil. this is like nepotism all over again but in a bad way

... I honestly can't believe you coincidentally came up with an oc Ami being the naruto fill in for the mizuki trap. and then this OC Ami is also on the same team as Sakura, the canon Ami used to be are biggest bully

haha this AU is crazy.
Evil Hiruzen, Apathetic Minato omg.

kill the bastard make him suffer

i guess i am a degenerate now, thank you

When the new part will come?

I was under the assumption that most of the big clans practised incest we know that both the Hyuga and Uchiha don't marry outside the clan so everyone in those clans must be related same with the Yuki and Kaguya clan as far as I'm aware.

I thought that Chakra sorta kept the bad side of incest out due to magic power...

You gotta update

I'm done with this Yuri shit and fuck this story man... It was good at first but with the weirdness of the characters turns me off

Yo update this great story please

I like the way you describe things, to my stop the story is very interesting, I hope it has lemon because being completely sinsy that was the initial reason why I enter, now I am also interested in the plot but I still want lemon

Intense very intense

God why did Ami tell them it was a female, shes an idiot, she wants to help Kasumi yet she just caused her problems, immediately I can tell I won't like Ami as a character if this is how she acts.

Please continue
I love this

damn! this been years~ fuck... would the Author continuing this fics somehow?