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Hi, a excellent story, i read a couple of stories about ami being the girl that pick on sakura during the academy years about the forehead, so i thought she was canon.
I didn't find any major spelling or grammar errors so good job.
I was also thinking those naruto powers allow him to increase uzumaki traits, like making karin, Tsunade and other quarters one increase? To maybe a half. Is Tayuya uzumaki as well.

Next ? Please?

Hey I love your story so far ok..

I lost interest in reading this story after you introduced Senju Arashi

Good story, it's great, I hope it continues soon, greetings, we're seeing each other, bye bye!

I love this fix, if only you kept going :(

This is really good and I hope that you finish this someday soon.

Next please kami-sama?

Great job please continue

Amazing story. Something I've noticed as the story goes on, though, is that Naruto and the rest of his family seem to be getting colder and more heartless to those outside their family. I won't go into whether this harshness is justified or not, I'm just saying that not all the people they interact with deserve that treatment and it sometimes makes it harder to sympathize with Naruto and his family. Take Jiraya and Kakashi, for instance; all things considered, they seem to be some of the only decent people in Konoha, yet, Kushina and Naruto are always especially harsh with them and won't give them the chance to make amends. If this story ever gets updated again, I hope to see the two of them get the chance to make amends with Kushina and her family.

Amusing story on the whole. I definitely have an incest kink so that certainly helped. Alongside the general theme of family above all, which (minus the incest) is reflected in my own life, so that’s always fun.
The original characters were a bit obnoxious but weren’t overbearing... yet. Akashi was certainly set up to be the most boring and trite villain possible (honestly the quality of that particular plot-line was miles below the rest of this story, and the rest of the story was only “fun” so that says a lot.)
Overall the story was a lot of fun, I don’t deny that. Overpowered main and a harem of hot women that he’s devoted to and they’re devoted to him in return... stories like that can be an absolute blast to read. There were certainly a lot of redundant scenes and descriptions where you did nothing but repeat known information over and over again. Likewise as the story went on you seemed to be attempting to make it into a more serious tale on the whole and let me tell you - it wasn’t working. Aside from those issues though... it was a fun power-fantasy. Cheers, mate.

This is still my favorite Naruto fic I’ve ever read it’s even better a second time around!

Good Chapter!

More chapters, please!