|Reviews for Total Pokemon World Tour|
| Pokemans and Birds chapter 9 . 3/27
I KNEW IT WASDIGLETT, NOT FROMSAME TYPING, BUT FROM THEFACT BOTH TECHNICALLY LIVE IN DIRT But seriously, why would a Ground type be in a major relationship with a water type? Doesn't make much sense to me.
| JKthunder chapter 6 . 2/11
I liek it but I want an Aftermath show
| Guest chapter 40 . 11/25/2016
Good story! This is my third time rereading it and it's great! Lots of fun and character development
| Guest chapter 19 . 11/21/2016
Very good chapter, lots of drama! I liked seeing a more emotional side to Bronzong, and what Hypnosis did to Weavile? Ouch.
That being said, your portrayal of Heatran was not good. You seemed to be trying to portray her as a transgender woman but it was very transphobic. You didn't really use proper pronouns and purported the negative stereotype of trans WOMEN being "men in dresses". You say you didn't mean anything offensive, and while that may be true, it was. Intent only goes so far.
| Guest chapter 18 . 11/21/2016
Really liked this bit:
Alakazam's eyes widened as everyone charged him.
| dragonrush chapter 40 . 10/5/2016
BANETTE AND WEAVILE YASSSS
| Promethium 63 chapter 20 . 8/24/2016
Ground Fire Stone powder explodes. Luxio could have powered the lasers and built it out of reflective gems.
| chris chapter 2 . 7/24/2016
really interesting and i like the whole weavile hypno thing going on
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/3/2016
it was hypno who got dragonite out
| ChibiMuffehnz27 chapter 38 . 2/28/2016
| Guest chapter 40 . 11/30/2015
This, along with total pokemon island, was the best piece of art I've ever read. You've made it suspensful, just how it's supposed to be. Every chapter was amazing and I do encourage you to keep writing this. Who is your favorite character though? Mines Weavile lol. Best wishes from me
| Skyress1 chapter 40 . 10/21/2015
It's satisfactionary... I'll give you that. However, Banette and Weavil's is one that feels more like a friendship date... not a very romantic one. The end was most certainly better than the one in the first season... it was more explained... more interesting and only five really interesting players (despite the fact that Hypno was a jerk) had made it to the final five. Not to mention the chill most people must have felt when Cacturne fully revealed both of his sides.
I personally dislike the pairing with Celebi and Mew... since they never seemed like a good couple and with Celebi being all the more feisty in this season... it wasn't that much better.
However, I do like Gardevoir and Cacturne, just like most people probably do and I started strongly agreeing with the fact that Gliscor should break up with Pideot after what she had said.
Over all it was a great season and I am pretty sure we can all agree that all the songs were rather good considering it must have been written by the same person, except Hitmonlee's but I think I might be right in assuming that you had screwed that one up on purpose because of your obvious dislike for Hitmonlee and the fact that torturing him was working out better for the fans of this story than letting him sing.
The fights with Mewtwo and Banette were funny and I am somewhat sad that there might never be two characters that act so hilariously when they argue and fight like Banette and Mewtwo, but the fact that they got over their hatred to each other is pleasing too.
I was planning on making a story with Weavil falling in love with someone totally different. However, seeing as she has gotten on a date with Banette and she might have more chances to find love, I think that I should leave it be, if not forever then at least for a while longer...
| Skyress1 chapter 39 . 10/21/2015
Okay so... I don't think Primeape is weird any more and Rhydon might actually be a decent guy.
Of course... man this is intriguing...
I really feel at peace knowing the two Cacturnes have returned back to one.. he was admittedly creepy...
| Skyress1 chapter 38 . 10/21/2015
LOL - SO hypno is finally out!
Please let it be Gardevoir who wins...
Alakazam... actually turned into the good person that he wanted to be this season..
I hope Weavil will find her happiness...
| Skyress1 chapter 37 . 10/21/2015
Poor Diglett... but hey...
And some day you should tell me if Mewtwo ACTUALLY didn't leave Banette there because of that reason mentioned before...
Because Mewtwo is different from Mew.. for one he is less evil... in way... and he's more hilarious... and he cooks WAY better...