Reviews for Church Belle
Imashitowareto chapter 16 . 12/11/2010
oo!first time to see this kind of pattern to describe Cloris feeling!good!
Cali a.k.a Cloudy Flower chapter 16 . 11/30/2010
I liked what you did with my story "Since I've Been loving you" and also "Her Smile" they were very pretty.

Anyways, the others were very nice too. My only complaint, too short man! Make 'em longer. :3 I know not many people review fics nowadays but I hope you continue writing more. :3

Good job.


Cali chapter 9 . 11/10/2010
Wow... that was SO heartbreakingly bittersweet. :( Really, it was so sad...

even though it's short it's still very good, keep up the good work!

P.S. Brilliant theme idea! xD

Peace out, C:
Lethe Erisdottir chapter 7 . 11/7/2010
Hmmm, never a big fan of this pair, mainly because I see her responding to Cloud as a reflection of Zack more than to Cloud himself. (Hah- overthink much, Lethe?) Of course, if you take it in terms of just the original game...nope, still see her sensing Zack.

But I like what you're doing here, condensing things down into moments. Nice work.