Reviews for Warslayer |
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NathanTankersley chapter 44 . 2/4 please update |
juanperez299992 chapter 44 . 10/21/2023 great story, please continue writing |
primalparadox chapter 19 . 10/13/2023 A Commissar with zero reaction to hearing "the Powers that Be" uttered by a demon? Also why are they leaving the demons that don't attack people in Sunnydale alone? I get it with Willy as he's a useful informant. Any other demon being left alone by the Inquisition doesn't make sense and no reasoning has been offered to explain it. But yeah anyone in the Imperium hearing about the PtB should be having conniptions and start firing wildly in the direction of the speaker while frothing at the mouth right? |
primalparadox chapter 10 . 10/13/2023 Big problem here. They just accepted being made a government department. They are no longer in charge of themselves or their holdings by doing so. |
mr1980rivera chapter 43 . 5/26/2023 God I love this story it's a pleasure to reread it I wish you well health and may whatever God you believe in bless you |
Spacemonkey777 chapter 44 . 5/5/2023 This always confused me. Even light Frigates have a mass measured in hundreds of megatons of pure Adamantium, Plasteel, and Ceremite. How doesn't each soldier have carapace armor with such industrial capabilities? Also please start defanging Earth governments, they are starting to make no sense at this point. Seriously, its just a conflict for the sake of conflict. A liability that can be easily solved. Yet they let foreign, enemy power foster on the home planet. NO SENSE! |
Spacemonkey777 chapter 41 . 5/5/2023 Why doesn't Imperium spread its influence on Earth? Afterall, what is SGC or other country's influence if their own populace will believe in the Emperor? |
Spacemonkey777 chapter 39 . 5/5/2023 Straight to the Interrogator? Not even Acolyte or Throne Agent? Gee. |
Spacemonkey777 chapter 15 . 5/5/2023 What? Why is she about to invest so much trust into a traitor? Being inquisitor is kind of a big deal! |
Spacemonkey777 chapter 14 . 5/5/2023 BURN THEM ALL! :D |
Spacemonkey777 chapter 9 . 5/5/2023 It's simple to convince Hamond about Aquillas. "You know that demons are real. You know that demons corrupt. You know that Aquilla protects from corruption. Think of it as a metaphysical firewall. Do you want your next tank, dreadnought, rifle, or spaceship to open a mouth full of tentacles and mind-melt everything within 100 miles with a speech from hell? Huh? Didn't think so. So please shut up and leave it to people who have been waging a war across a million worlds for 10,000 years against things you barely know anything about!" "Ummm." "That would be all General Hammond, President, Senate. Have a good day." |
Spacemonkey777 chapter 8 . 5/5/2023 Staff shot to the arm will burn it. Lasrifle shot to the arm will blow it off. It's east to see that its much more powerful than staff. And since Carapace can reliably tank a few hits from the lasrifle I can't see it not tanking a dozen or two from the staff. |
Spacemonkey777 chapter 7 . 5/5/2023 I can't see SGC rolling with the whole purging any and all xeno ideology. But I guess Jaffa are just abhumans and 95% species of Milky Way are humans or their variants. |
Spacemonkey777 chapter 6 . 5/5/2023 Nice chapter. I only wish you were a bit more detailed in everything. |
Spacemonkey777 chapter 5 . 5/5/2023 Thank you for thinking of characters who are skeptical of their surrounding. Also, love darker hints of trio's personalities. Not as dark as original impact of 40k possession should give but still dark enough to see hints of grimdark somewhere deep in there. |