|Reviews for Stay With Me|
| Carrotz8 chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
Yay! That's was awesome! Great work, keep it up :3 I'd love to read more :D
| ColorfulSkittles291 chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Although it would've been better if you had put their dialogue in spaces, I liked this. And it's strange...I usually don't read Rating M...
| AsamiUchiha12 chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
This was so amazingly epic!
Alfred X Arthur is one of my favorite hetaila pairings, and as a fan i have to say this was really good. 3'd it
| xXLoveSugarChildXx chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
You know this is actually pretty cute! 3
The only problem I had is you seemed to hit fast forward for that last paragraph like the only reason you added it was to make this M. ' I was like "WHOAH WHOAH SLOW DOWN WHAT?" XD
Lol But other than that, I liked it.
| HanakoAnimeaddict chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
It was a somewhat enjoyable story. I only say somewhat enjoyable because it was put into huge paragraphs. Usually, a paragraph ends after someone stops talking and someone else starts.
Otherwise, it's good!
| Fai'swingedchronicles chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
I enjoyed reading it! I felt so sorry for him I hate it whne someone wakes me up so fast ;A;
The only problem with this is that its hard to read. You have to start a new paragraph everytime someone talks:
"Alfred! Get up Arthur yelled, "You're goin to be late!" Arthur grabbed...
"leave me alone!" Alfred whined