Reviews for Stay With Me
PhantasticTroyler chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
Yay! That's was awesome! Great work, keep it up :3 I'd love to read more :D
ColorfulSkittles291 chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Although it would've been better if you had put their dialogue in spaces, I liked this. And it's strange...I usually don't read Rating M...
AsamiUchiha12 chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
This was so amazingly epic!

Alfred X Arthur is one of my favorite hetaila pairings, and as a fan i have to say this was really good. 3'd it~
xXLoveSugarChildXx chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
You know this is actually pretty cute! 3

The only problem I had is you seemed to hit fast forward for that last paragraph like the only reason you added it was to make this M. ' I was like "WHOAH WHOAH SLOW DOWN WHAT?" XD

Lol~ But other than that, I liked it.
HanakoAnimeaddict chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Poor Alfred~

It was a somewhat enjoyable story. I only say somewhat enjoyable because it was put into huge paragraphs. Usually, a paragraph ends after someone stops talking and someone else starts.

Otherwise, it's good!
Fai'swingedchronicles chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
I enjoyed reading it! I felt so sorry for him I hate it whne someone wakes me up so fast ;A;

The only problem with this is that its hard to read. You have to start a new paragraph everytime someone talks:

"Alfred! Get up Arthur yelled, "You're goin to be late!" Arthur grabbed...

"leave me alone!" Alfred whined