Reviews for Black Eye Stone
RandySeth chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
I enjoyed this version of the fight with that aggravating crossbow thief. I never gave the back stories of NPCs in Demon's Souls much thought, unlike Dark Souls, but nevertheless, this was an interesting read...
Old Monk chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
I know of this man you speak of. I request more of his plight be publicized in this story.

(OOC) nice start
Brian chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
wow this is what i call a story this is very good and detailed too. :D i love how i knew exactly what part of the game you were talking about lol, that woman is annoying lol
Syntipathy chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
I hadn't realised there was a Demon's Souls fanfic around here.

The story's pace evokes the game's pace well, though it would be nice to capture more of the gloomyiness of Boletaria.

If you decide to continue this, I'll be very eager to read it!