|Reviews for A Bunch of Chisame Shipping Fics|
| omegarulesall chapter 2 . 11/8/2010
This story is very good. Keep it up.
| RedSavant chapter 2 . 11/8/2010
You've pretty much already heard my opinions on Zazie's bit. Fumika's was good, too - I didn't expect many, if any, hints of impending sexytimes, and lo and behold, there were none.
Your formatting got kinda weird toward the end - like this:
'Chisame and Chao both stared at the the source of the flash, trying to look around the floating black spots that now domiposed to. The rest of it hung loosely, barely attached by its numerous their vision.'
Your section numbers also got confused in your author's notes. )
Also: I have to say, I like the ending of 2.1. It implies that Chisame's Chao's ancestor, and things have just gotten royally screwed.
Keep up the good work!
| Hashkorns chapter 2 . 11/8/2010
I already knew Chisame was badass, but not to this extent of badass. They should just replace Negi with Chisame as harem master :P
| OverMaster chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Keep it going, and good luck with it!