Reviews for Watching Over Me
rhiannondavidson chapter 2 . 6/9/2013
Aw, I love that Don finally got some time with his mom, and this was really sweet.
Writer With Sprite chapter 3 . 1/26/2011
great chapter! i always love the ones that make me think!
schnerb chapter 3 . 1/3/2011
Great last chapter to a great fic. You wrapped it all up so well and true to the show. I particularly liked the way you wove it round the episode so well.

Excellent job.
Deanna chapter 3 . 1/1/2011
This was really, really good ! We always felt that there should have been more to the "Hot Shot" episode, and you filled in some missing pieces. I can actually see this happening as part of the episode. Thank you. You did a great job of the emotions here. Keep up the fantastic work !
Cissyaliza chapter 3 . 1/1/2011
I like your fic, really... Thanks and happy new year
PattyB chapter 3 . 12/31/2010
I read this final chapter very late on New Years Eve, soon to be New Years Day and I can't think of a better start than spending the moment with the Eppes family and the Numb3rs community.

Alan's taking Don's beer away from him was a nice little touch and the Alan as I think of him, doing what he thinks best for his son. His/your words about regret were beautiful, ..."life is full of regrets . . . things we did do and things we didn't". So true, so very true.

Hope to see you around with more stories soon. I enjoy your work.
PattyB chapter 2 . 12/31/2010
I can see why you cried. I'm with you - Don is entitled to a scene with his mother and did a nice job on it.

I was a little surprised at the beginning when Don apparently woke up at home but the dream with his mother explained it all.

When he actually woke up, it wasn't his mother waiting but his father. Not quite the same but it was family and who can ask for more.
PattyB chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
Hot Shot was a great episode and I love to read different authors' take on the aftermath.

This chapter was a good start and I look forward to reading the other chapters . . . .
Ms.GrahamCracker chapter 3 . 12/31/2010
Great ending. Love Alan and Don together and Don's admission that he saw his mother was simply heartbreaking. And I loved how you wove it into the actual scenes from the show. This ending of yours would have improved the original episode a great deal. Thank goodness we have fanfiction writers like you to fill in where the series failed to deliver. Thank you.
Rinne chapter 3 . 12/31/2010
I have to say that my favourite bit is probably Alan taking the beer off him. Made me giggle. Nicely ended.
luvnumb3rs chapter 2 . 12/8/2010
I by passed this story many times for reason I do not know but I am so glad I took teh time to read it today this was a great addition to an already great episode. i always felt they left to much out of that episode.
Deanna chapter 2 . 12/1/2010
"Can we have some more, please"? It would be really nice to continue from here, maybe with Don's feelings as the drugs took effect, or Don letting Charlie know that he saw his Mom and talked with her too... Anything you continue with, I'm sure it will add to this already great story! Thanks for this!
schnerb chapter 2 . 11/18/2010
Just found this story and really liked it. I kind of get why Alan and Charlie saw Margaret and Don didn't - but I'm very happy that you gave him the opportunity!

I think that's exactly what Margaret would have said to him too. Also glad she didn't let him go with her!

Good job.
lovesanimals chapter 2 . 11/15/2010
I, too, am glad that you gave Don some time with his mother. He does need to be told that he is doing a good job more often.
TMNTMentalistTLK lover chapter 2 . 11/14/2010
hey there just wanted to say that I love this story so far. I especailly liked this scene with Don and his mm becasue like you I felt like Don should have gotten a scene with his mother like Charlie and Alan did. Anyways great chapter and update soon please
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